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PostSubject: Re: Asakura Grave - License/Request section   Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 EmptyFri Aug 10 2018, 21:38

Custom Clan for 3rd character.

+ Mazoku Clan +
- A clan that came from the Demon Country located on the other continent. They continued to battle in the past in order to spread destruction and chaos to the world. In the end nobody knew why as time went on they seemed to have vanished. Only to now resurface to the new world are they going to spread the powers of a demon once again.

( - Abilities - )

+ - Yonou - Demon Ability - +
+ One unlocks the powers and spiritual uses of a demon.
x Effect: Unlock/Create Mazokujutsu (Demonic Techniques)

+ Demon Soul +
+ Born as a Mazoku the soul is known as a “Demon Soul” causing them to not being allowed to be follow the path of rebirth. It’s the path one walks when becoming a demon.
x Effect: Soul = Demon Soul  [Demon Soul = Sanity + Brawn]

+ - Mazoku Powers - +
+ The blood of the demon allows one to use the powers of “Demonic Chakra.” One is able to switch between the two but they do not get stronger as they grow stronger.
x Effect: Unlock “Demonic Chakra”
x Restrictions: Can only increase Chakra or Demonic Chakra when leveling up.

( - Kekkei Genkai - )

+ - Mazoku Curse - +
+ The blood of a demon flows through the person as the battle goes on the demon blood boils growing stronger.
x Effect:  Attributes x1.xx [ xx = Battle Level]  
Time Limt: B.Lv 1 -25 = 1 Turns | 26 - 50 = 2 Turns | 51 - 75 = 3 Turns | 76 - 100 = 4 Turns
x Restriction:  Must be Indra | Cannot Exceed over Battle Level: "100"
x Requirement: Obtained at Birth

( - Styles - )

+ - Daiyokai -  Great Body of the Demon - +
x The Mazoku Clan's fighting style that was developed when facing against powerful priest and priestess.
x Type: Inactive + Supplementary
x Limit: Mazoku Curse "Ruling"
x Effect: Mazoku Techniques Cost Halved

+ - Ikari Paumu - Fury Palm - +
x The Mazoku clan's fighting style that was built for offensive blows leaving nothing in some cases.
x Type: Passive
x Effect: Melee + Taijutsu DMG x1.25

( - Techniques - )
Mazokujutsus = Ninjutsu Formula [Unless stated]

- Yojuugan – Demon Spirit Bullet -
+ Its powers are said to rival that of the Hikari country’s “ Asakura Clan” But it does not suffer the use of it’s a charge as it fires a powerful blast of dark chakra.
x Dark Chakra Cost: -40%
x Type: Offensive
x Effect: DMG = 30% Demon Soul

- Yo-Ken – Demon Sword -
+ A blade of dark chakra now forms at the palm of one’s hand.
x Dark Chakra Cost: -20% [Act] | -10% [Per Turn]
x Type: Offensive
x Effect: DMG = 15% Demon Soul


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What is this clan for?
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Its for my 3rd character if it was possible to just transfer over to this clan. I created some new things for the site for the clan as they use a different level of chakra known as "Demonic" Chakra but its not like how dark chakra is for negative emotions its because of their blood. Even more how Soul is demon soul now if that was okay?
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PostSubject: Re: Asakura Grave - License/Request section   Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 EmptySat Aug 11 2018, 13:42

I will say this its an okay idea.

1. The clan or characters will be very limited for several reasons.
- The clan cannot use items that use Soul as you have Demon Soul.
- The clan cannot use anything with Chakra or Dark Chakra types.

2. + - Ikari Paumu - Fury Palm - +
- Needs to be reduced to +15%

3. Daiyokai - Great Body of the Demon
- Does this trigger with the curse?
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PostSubject: Re: Asakura Grave - License/Request section   Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 EmptySat Aug 11 2018, 16:48

1. Yes that what I was wanting to happen/
2. Done
3. Yes

Custom Clan for 3rd character.

+ Mazoku Clan +
- A clan that came from the Demon Country located on the other continent. They continued to battle in the past in order to spread destruction and chaos to the world. In the end nobody knew why as time went on they seemed to have vanished. Only to now resurface to the new world are they going to spread the powers of a demon once again.

( - Abilities - )

+ - Yonou - Demon Ability - +
+ One unlocks the powers and spiritual uses of a demon.
x Effect: Unlock/Create Mazokujutsu (Demonic Techniques)

+ Demon Soul +
+ Born as a Mazoku the soul is known as a “Demon Soul” causing them to not being allowed to be follow the path of rebirth. It’s the path one walks when becoming a demon.
x Effect: Soul = Demon Soul  [Demon Soul = Sanity + Brawn]

+ - Mazoku Powers - +
+ The blood of the demon allows one to use the powers of “Demonic Chakra.” One is able to switch between the two but they do not get stronger as they grow stronger.
x Effect: Unlock Chakra becomes “Demonic Chakra”
x Restrictions: Increase Demonic Chakra when leveling up.

( - Kekkei Genkai - )

+ - Mazoku Curse - +
+ The blood of a demon flows through the person as the battle goes on the demon blood boils growing stronger.
x Effect:  Attributes x1.xx [ xx = Battle Level]  
Time Limt: B.Lv 1 -25 = 1 Turns | 26 - 50 = 2 Turns | 51 - 75 = 3 Turns | 76 - 100 = 4 Turns
x Restriction:  Must be Indra | Cannot Exceed over Battle Level: "100"
x Requirement: Obtained at Birth

( - Styles - )

+ - Daiyokai -  Great Body of the Demon - +
x The Mazoku Clan's fighting style that was developed when facing against powerful priest and priestess.
x Type: Inactive + Supplementary
x Limit: Mazoku Curse "Ruling" + Triggers with Mazoku Curse
x Effect: Mazoku Techniques Cost Halved

+ - Ikari Paumu - Fury Palm - +
x The Mazoku clan's fighting style that was built for offensive blows leaving nothing in some cases.
x Type: Passive
x Effect: Melee + Taijutsu DMG x1.15

( - Techniques - )
Mazokujutsus = Ninjutsu Formula [Unless stated]

- Yojuugan – Demon Spirit Bullet -
+ Its powers are said to rival that of the Hikari country’s “ Asakura Clan” But it does not suffer the use of it’s a charge as it fires a powerful blast of demonic chakra.
x Demonic Chakra Cost: -40%
x Type: Offensive
x Effect: DMG = 30% Demon Soul

- Yo-Ken – Demon Sword -
+ A blade of dark chakra now forms at the palm of one’s hand.
x Demonic Chakra Cost: -20% [Act] | -10% [Per Turn]
x Type: Offensive
x Effect: DMG = 15% Demon Soul


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PostSubject: Re: Asakura Grave - License/Request section   Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 EmptySat Aug 11 2018, 19:41

Very well everything checks out and...Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 ELaGRw3
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PostSubject: Re: Asakura Grave - License/Request section   Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 EmptySat Aug 11 2018, 20:06

Tsukiyomi’s Jutsus
If these are not possible then I'll just have them created for Tsukiyomi's Mangekyo instead.

[non] are those without the sharingan.

+ - Mangekyo - Amano-Iwato – Heavenly Rock Cave - +
> In legends it was a cave that Amatersau the goddess of the sun would run and hide in. With the use of Mangekyo, Tsukiyomi is able to extinguish any and all flames in a battlefield. Another version was also created for those that did not have a mangekyo allowing them to do the same yet weaker.
x Chakra Cost: [EMS/MS] Half of Jutsu’s Cost | [Non] Jutsu Cost’s
x Type: Supplementary
x Hand Seals + Rank: 0 & [?] | 1 [Dragon] & E
x Effect: [EMS/MS] Negates all Katon Element Attacks [Mixed & Evloved] | [Non] Negates all Katon Element Attacks [Mixed]

+ - Mangekyo - Tsukuyomi’s White Copper Mirror - +
> It was stated Tsukuyomi was created from a mirror with white copper that was in Izanagi’s right hand. Using the right eye Tsukiyomi is able to cancel a Tsukuyomi technique. Another version was also created for those that did not have a mangekyo but it required a lot of chakra in order to cancel.
x Chakra Cost: [EMS/MS] Tsukuyomi’s Jutsu Cost | [Non] Tsukuyomi’s Jutsu Cost x1.25
x Type: Supplementary
x Hand Seals + Rank: 0 & [?] | 1 [Rat – Right Hand] & E
x Effect: Negates all Tsukuyomi’s related Attack
x Drawback: [Non] Go blind in the Right Eye for 1 day. | [Non] -1 Mirror

Mazoku Toshiyomi

[I’d like to give the Hyuuga clan the techniques that Toshi made for them but in exchange can I have another set created for him as they were going to lead to his character awakening like so?”]
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PostSubject: Re: Asakura Grave - License/Request section   Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 EmptySat Aug 11 2018, 20:29

1. Its a different view of a jutsu, so is it for just Tsukiyomi or is it for everyone clan wise?

2. Same as 1.

3. As I said before and I will make a reminder on your update board and soon on OOC, If you have a character that has a Doujutsu and you already have 2 with doujutsus you need to remove one. In exchange of moving to a different clan or making an entirely new character you keep.

1. You keep everything Level, Attributes etc.
2. Keep Items that originally owned to Character.
3. Keep Jutsus created or learned by character.

If you wish for those techniques to be added to the Hyuuga as a request I can do that. But if you make any modifications to them you will have to post them up on here for approval or review again.
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The techniques are for Tsukiyomi but when he learns them or teaches them to someone else that is not of the sharingan they go by the other effects. I do not want them added to the Clan's Page as there is a shit ton already and for Mazoku Toshiyomi I will thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: Asakura Grave - License/Request section   Asakura Grave - License/Request section - Page 8 EmptySat Aug 11 2018, 21:11

Alright, after reviewing them and seeing how the techniques work and who they are for. I can allow them for what they can do.

1. Mangekyo was shown to take in the black flames with Sasuke Vs Bee, the Uchiha Clan following back from that time line I can allow. Even more so the fact that anti-Uchiha is existing means a more fun storyline.

2. Answering the questions of approval wise that I usually go by its fair even more so the fact of the 8 Jutsu limit you would have to choose which also limits you.

All in all, you created a jutsu for a Clan but also for others to learn which is a cross I was not expecting to happen. So I wish to see how this turns out but if it comes down to become to OP or over used I will have you change them to being used for clans or yourself only.

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Mazoku Demonic Chakra turns the elements into black element but its not an evolved nor does it give any bonuses.

Do “?” have a Damage Range of auto 75%, if not I added the damage range for them.

These are the revamped versions for the Mazoku Clan.

< Satsuijhinteki Mazoku – “Murderous Demonic Being“ Style >
> The form uses demonic chakra flowing around the entire body. Allowing them tap into the darker nature of demons. The desire to survive, trample and impose over others. It spreads like a virus however if one is struck by the power of this style they will soon obtain the weaker version of the Mazoku Curse. Mastering this form causes even greater forms of powers.
+ Type: Inactive
+ Limit: - - - -
+ Effect: Mazoku Curse: +1 Turn | Melee + Taijutsu gain “Mazoku Parasite Effect
+ Parent Style: Fury Palm + Daiyokai

< Battle Effect: Mazoku Parasite >
> This Effect causes one to tap into the powers of the Mazoku Curse. However they only can trigger temporarily when the requirements have been met.
+ Effect: Attributes x1.xx [xx = Battle Level] | -5% HP Each Turn
+ Limit: 2 Turns
+ Requirement: Must have 50% HP to Trigger. Hitting 25% HP auto triggers.

Kaijigoku – “Revolving Hell”
> One’s speeds up in order to create greater damage as well block damage they are spinning faster that one cannot stop them. Without having to focus on the rotation and chakra one is able to just focus on rotation. The faster one moves the dangerous they become.
+ Stamina Cost: -35%
+ Type: Offensive + Defensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: Blocked DMG = 30% of DEX | Damage Range: 35%

< Mazoku – Tribe of the Devils Vacuum Hell Fist - >
> Likes its counterpart it generates a powerful burst of wind when using one's fist, however the friction from the release cause flames to spark.
+ Stamina Cost: -28%
+ Type: Offensive + Defensive
+ Rank: [?]
+ Effect: DMG x1.25 | Counter: Opponent's DMG -25% | Causes Grade 1 Burn | Damage Range: 28%

< Kuro Fuuton - Black Wind Style - Kaijigoku Daunbāsuto - "Revolving Hell Downburst" >
> The finished development of Revolving Hell. Releasing demonic chakra of an element with the use of one's speed it creates a powerful burst of wind and damage. Now with the focus of rotation added with the chakra of wind this power is dangerous on its own.
+ Demonic Chakra + Stamina Cost: -45%
+ Type: Offensive + Defensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: Blocked DMG = 45% DEX | Damage Range: 45%

< Kuro Fuuton - Black Wind Style - Downburst Fists >
> Using the demonic chakra of wind, it cups around one's fists until released. As it fires it releases power burst that cut into its target dealing heavy damage. It leaves its opponent weaken far worse than its predecessors.
+ Demonic Chakra + Stamina Cost: -35%
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: 32% Damage = Direct Damage | Damage Range: 35%

< Kuro Fuuton – Black Wind Style - Downburst Hell Vacuum Fist >
> Adding wind chakra one is able to release a powerful burst of wind. To kill the impact of incoming attacks only to generate friction burning anything it touches.
+ Demonic Chakra + Stamina Cost: -38%
+ Type: Offensive + Defensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: DMG x1.30 | Counter: Target's DMG -35% | Causes Grade 2 Burn | Damage Range: 35%

< Satsui Mazoku – Tribe of the Devil Murderous Impulse >
> The fighting style allows a powerful and deadly move that causes one to unleash a ravage impulse of demonic chakra at the target. The enemy or target is left in a critical state or fall to the hands of death. The move is so quick it causes one to be taken by surprise and left without anytime of guarding.
+ Stamina Cost: -50%
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: 1% Demonic Chakra = +10 DMG | Counter Converse: If Counter, Target takes Melee DMG | Damage Range: 50%
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