Naruto: Path to Jidai
Welcome Guest or Member,
Please have a look around on Naruto Jidai before joining or if you are currently a member please sign on in. If anything Staff will be with you at all times to help answer questions that need to be answered.



 
HomeJidai IntroFAQUsergroupsRegisterLog in
+ - No Main Story Event - +
+ - Dragonball Z X Naruto Jidai - +
+ -The Ending Goal: 10,000 / 250,000 MF - +
Jidai Site Update: v3.0.1 - +

Share | 
 

 Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section

Go down 
AuthorMessage
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Thu Jul 05 2018, 20:17

[spoiler="Hijutsu: Hiraishin Style"]


Hijutsu - Doujutsu – Raiton No Masutā Style
One of the ultimate abilities of the Hiraishin clan. This ability is rarely seen due to the high level of mastery with their ultimate Doujutsu - the Raidengan. This ability allows them to cast Raiton jutsu with their Raidengan instead of needing hand seals.
Type: Passive
Effect:  Able to use Raiton/Raiton Combinations with no hand seals. Raiton DMG X 1.10
Requirement: Raidengan Mastery: 50%, Raidengan must be activated.

Back to top Go down
View user profile
Enjin
Guru
Guru
avatar

Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman
Post[s] : 2035
Joined : 2014-05-24

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Thu Jul 05 2018, 21:34

As a style choice, this looks good. This cannot be officially approved yet due to it being part of Hiraishin clan mechanics, but it looks good to me. Please wait from opinions from Omni.


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Omnicron
Deity
Deity
avatar

Post[s] : 1158
Joined : 2013-01-04

Ninja Profile
Reputation: S (5000)

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Tue Jul 10 2018, 19:20

I do not see any form or issue with it at all.

So with that...


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Wed Jul 11 2018, 23:50


+ Genin: Hetomi Iwamura
- Attribute Pts: BRW:67
Dex:67
Sanity:67
END:67
Intelligence:66
Awareness:66
- Jutsu Count: 6 E Rank
jutsu:
 


- Element: Fuuton
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Enjin
Guru
Guru
avatar

Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman
Post[s] : 2035
Joined : 2014-05-24

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Thu Jul 12 2018, 08:07

This is your Mercenary build correct? All the jutsu is legit and it looks good stat wise to me. I am giving it my approval-- and remember you can train their stats in place of your own TP to use.


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Fri Jul 27 2018, 22:18



C-Rank Summon: Zara (Sea Turtle)
Cost: 20%
Turn limit: 40 rounds

1 Abilities:

Aquatic Field
Zara constantly emits low amounts of moisture into the air - effectively powering Suiton and Suiton combination moves.
Effect: Suiton and Suiton combination DMG X 1.25 for all battle participants
'
2 Jutsu Rank C or lower

+ - Akigara - Empty Shell - >
> Used for interrogation, the techniques places a trance on another allowing information to be obtained easier. The jutsus leaves the target unable to function their body correctly and answer questions with ease.
+ Contact + Type: Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 2 + C
+ Effect: Sanity -25%[x0.25] + Target must answer all questions truthfully + Hypnosis.

+ - Kingusari - Golden Chain - >
> From underground golden chains will spiral from the ground wrapping around the target binding their movement. Allowing one unable to move their ankles, wrists and neck.
+ Contact + Type: Visual or None + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + C
+ Effect: Restrains [2 Turns] + Sanity -25% [x0.25]


:Note: I know this won't be until Chuunin Exams are over that I get to use it. Not a problem.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sun Aug 12 2018, 09:57

Need to completely Revamp the above with new summon rules, so disregard that.

Sage Ideas

Sage Hi-Ability

+ - Aqua Aura- >
> The Sage energy coalesces around Shan as he enters Sage Mode. The energy acts as a water and cooling ability around him - though it does not inhibit his breathing. The aura tends to take the shape of a turtle.
+ Effect: Katon [+ Advanced Katon + Katon Mixes] Damage reduced by 50% (X.5) when used against Shan.  Katon [+ Advanced Katon + Katon Mixes] effects negated on Shan (including drawbacks from his own Jutsu)


Sage Hi-Jutsu - TBD when I reach S rank probably.


Thoughts behind Aqua Aura - I've got Turtle Sage Mode so it makes sense. The idea is that it reduces fire damage passively and makes me immune to negative effects both from my opponent's fire + fire mixes jutsu as well as from my own (i.e. Plasma).
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Enjin
Guru
Guru
avatar

Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman
Post[s] : 2035
Joined : 2014-05-24

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sun Aug 12 2018, 13:18

You can negate the katon mixed effects and damage to a degree-- but not their drawbacks as a passive ability.

And also gonna chyeck with omni as it is a lot to put into a single sage ability.


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Omnicron
Deity
Deity
avatar

Post[s] : 1158
Joined : 2013-01-04

Ninja Profile
Reputation: S (5000)

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sun Aug 12 2018, 15:22

With Aqua Aura the concept is a great idea for the use of it all. But it does have a lot on to it for its effects. Here see if this is okay...

+ - Aqua Aura- >
> The Sage energy coalesces around Shan as he enters Sage Mode. The energy acts as a water and cooling ability around him - though it does not inhibit his breathing. The aura tends to take the shape of a turtle.
+ Effect: Katon [Evolved | Mix] Damage -50% [x.50] | Negate Drawbacks of Katon [Evolved | Mix]

With it being Drawbacks the aura is not stopping the element ability. Because those are effects that are auto added to the technique. Drawbacks is like using it and he getting damaged from the use like bruising sky leg.


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sun Aug 12 2018, 23:11

How would that interact with plasma stuff since the Instant Death isn't placed beneath a Drawbacks area.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Omnicron
Deity
Deity
avatar

Post[s] : 1158
Joined : 2013-01-04

Ninja Profile
Reputation: S (5000)

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sun Aug 19 2018, 21:30

It will not be able to because of that Instant Death is due to the heat levels that are like the levels of stars themselves but lower levels [ranks] would not have that effect. Remember those techniques are just basic ideas for plasma. That does not mean all Plasma says, "Use me and you are dead deal."


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Wed Aug 22 2018, 20:01

I'll take it.

Now, I still need to make my summon XD
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sat Sep 01 2018, 23:04

+ - Brown Dwarf - >
> A small ball of "cool" plasma energy is created. The brown dwarf is the coolest of all stars and this small ball is formed in the sky over the head of the user as they raise their hand upwards. When the user throws their hand downwards, the ball of plasma flies towards the enemy, severely burning everyone around.
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) & Rank: 6 + C
+ Effect: Life Energy (HP) x 5 + lowers the population of a minor country by 25% | Max Grade Burns
+ Drawback: Max Grade Burns on the user.

As plasma, I severely reduced the damage (from 100X to 5X), made it only lower the population of a minor country instead of destroy one, and lowered instant death to Max Grade burns. Thoughts? Wasn't sure what a C rank plasma would look like.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Enjin
Guru
Guru
avatar

Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman
Post[s] : 2035
Joined : 2014-05-24

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sat Sep 01 2018, 23:29

Bear in mind-- plasma on site is MEANT TO be OP. Custom Jutsu might not be as strong as you perceive.

For starters, No way a C rank jutsu is gonna remove population count of any kind. Remove that right there. You can make it an AOE sure but not that kind of thing.

Second, This will need to be confirmed with Omni, but HP X 5 is broken and still super strong. I would use its base damage + have a % of your HP for this. Or at least if HP * X is allowed here, make it 3 or below.

Again, best we discuss this in the discord chat with OMni as well to confirm custom made Plasma's limitations.


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sat Sep 15 2018, 12:18

My response is that I severely nerfed on site Plasma and kept its intentions while weakening it. If you think it is too powerful, then I suggest we either


1. Weaken Plasma in general


or


2. Discuss it with omni
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Enjin
Guru
Guru
avatar

Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman
Post[s] : 2035
Joined : 2014-05-24

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Sat Sep 15 2018, 16:18

I say you wait for Omni and i will forward this to him. He was the one to invent plasma, but i am going off base on my experience. so please wait a little bit.


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Archaea
Chunin
Chunin
avatar

Post[s] : 1100
Joined : 2018-06-28

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Mon Sep 24 2018, 16:33

+ - Brown Dwarf  - >
> A small ball of "cool" plasma energy is created. The brown dwarf is the coolest of all stars and this small ball is formed in the sky over the head of the user as they raise their hand upwards. When the user throws their hand downwards, the ball of plasma flies towards the enemy, severely burning everyone around.
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) & Rank: 6 + C
+ Effect: Life Energy (HP) x 5 + lowers the population of a minor country by 15% | Max Grade Burns
+ Drawback: Max Grade Burns on the user.


As Omni has suggested, I have made the change to lower the population loss.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Enjin
Guru
Guru
avatar

Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman
Post[s] : 2035
Joined : 2014-05-24

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:01

Wait so population is lowered allowed?!


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Omnicron
Deity
Deity
avatar

Post[s] : 1158
Joined : 2013-01-04

Ninja Profile
Reputation: S (5000)

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:03

Yes, population returns to normal after 1 week. It just cannot be crazy high unless a trade.


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Enjin
Guru
Guru
avatar

Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman
Post[s] : 2035
Joined : 2014-05-24

PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:04

I see-- then i approve. Approved jutsu


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section   

Back to top Go down
 
Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Requesting Admin Approval ((I think))
» Approval Thread
» Chris "Grimmy" Cole
» Yoshimitsu Kyosheen ~~awaiting approval~~
» The Satō Clan [Chakra Regeneration] (Ready for Approval)

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Naruto: Path to Jidai :: + - Neutral Zone - + :: - Approval Lounge --
Jump to:  
ChatBox