Jutsu Creation (Fuu edition)

(Personal)Kokyū-hō: Mahi no hitei (Breathing technique: Paralysis negation)
Description:With a special breathing technique this ability can counter stunning effects
Cost: 5% Chakra
Type: Supplementery
Hand Seal + Rank: 0 + E
Effect: Negate one Stun effect

I'm making Summons now. first I'm doing the smallest sized one

C-Rank Summon: Jinichi (Hercules Beetle) (WiP)
Cost: 20%
Turn limit: 40 rounds
1 Abilities:
Beetle's Endurance: +30% endurance (passive)
Description: Beetles hard outer shell makes them much more difficult to damage than many others.
2 Jutsu Rank C or lower
Beetle Stone Expansion Shield:
Type: Defensive (ninjutsu)
Rank: C
Description: The Hercules beetle slames their horn into the ground and errects a temporary earth barrier to Block for themselves or allies
Effect: Block Targeted or AoE Jutsu EndX1.25= Blocked Damage

Horn Rush:
Type: Offensive (Taijutsu)
Rank: C
Description: Rushing forward to Slam their horn into the stomach of their opponent and then shove them into the ground after.
Effect: Damage x1.2 | Stun [Cannot be stacked back to back]

Description of Summon: Jinichi is a cat sized Beetle with the signature Horn of his species, his carapace covering his wings is stark white, with little groves in it. the rest of him is black, but he is very friendly looking.

It would seem that everything is in order and...

Nicely done, be sure to add it to your Hijutsu Thread for Fuu to be able to use it.

https://narutojidai.rpg-board.net/f146-x-hijutsu-x

Sage Mode Hi-ability:
Beetle shell
Bettle sage chakra forms around Fuu like a protective shell reducing damage from all forms of attacks.
Effect: Damage taken reduced by 30%

Sage Mode Hi-jutsu: 
Akushitsuna Tatsumaki (Vicious Tornado)
Rank and Hand seals: C & 3
Parent Jutsu: Tatsumaki
Description: A more violent tornado of scorching wind surrounds the target often leaving any part touched a mummified husk.
Effect: Scorch control=Direct Damage, Max Burn, Secondary body area effected by Burn status (example: Body & Legs or Arms & body burned)

Can you specify the secondary body area effect part? That one isn't very clear. Also-- remember this version of sage mode allows you to have 2 free Hi jutsu. Right?

To save on effects you can just place Mummification for the tornado as I placed that element ability does direct damage equal to control. Also Enjin, the secondary body effect means what other damage body takes. As hitting one's arms with fire they get burned and lose 25% of the attribute. The technique now target two parts of the body so Arms and Legs lowering BRW by 25% and Dex by 25%

Okay fair enough. This is approvable.