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PostSubject: Too Many Makotos   Tue Jul 31 2018, 00:15

Makoto was walking through the village, looking pensive. Recently, the Chuunin Exams had been held. His father had made him watch the fights because he’d “learn something” from them. After watching most of the fights, he figured that all he learned was that the other villages had some strong fighters. And that he would have to step it up if he wanted to stand a chance at the next exam.
The boy was confident though.

Currently, he was heading to a local restaurant. For you see, during the Chuunin Exam, he had met someone interesting. A blonde child named… Shan was it? Shin? He had basically stopped paying attention by the second half of the exams. But what was important was, Shan had access to some sort of special jutsu. And he was willing to teach it to the Junpaku!

Makoto was currently heading to the restaurant to meet Shan. They’d agree to meet somewhere around there, though the snow haired boy didn’t exact instructions so… Yeah he’d not worry about it until after he made it to the place.

Soon enough, Makoto would stroll up in front of the place. It was a pretty small place, served good meat though.
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Jul 31 2018, 13:59

Shan walked through the streets of Kiri. Some people called out to him in recognition. It wasn’t fame or infamy – neither of which Shan would be particularly against. No, this was recognition simply because he was a finalist in the Chuunin Exams. Afterwards, they had proclaimed him as a Chuunin from Kumo. He was not a Chuunin.

He was a Missing-Nin. At least, anyone who asked him what he was would be told that. For now, Shan walked and ignored those crying out to him. He really wanted to move on from Kiri but there was too much he needed here. For starters, there was the person he was going to meet. As Shan had practiced and thought, he came to a conclusion. He could gain power on his own, but he could never become so powerful that those with groups couldn’t defeat him.

Thus, he would form his own group and that started right here in Kiri, today. He was going to meet a boy named Makoto at a small restaurant known as ‘The Frozen Spoon”. He wasn’t exactly sure about the name, but – as he arrived – Shan had to admit the place looked nice.
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Jul 31 2018, 14:19

Makoto had started to get impatient, it had been a couple of minutes. Did the guy actually get lost? Was he taking his time? Or did he give up and leave the Mist boy hanging? Makoto sighed and turned to look in front of the restaurant. There were some people walking around, doing their things, a blonde kid, oh hey was that a bi- Makoto looked back at the blonde kid. And it was indeed Shan!

Makoto would run his hand through his hair and then walked over to the Genin. He raised a hand up “Yo! You sure kept me waiting, huh?”
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Jul 31 2018, 21:00

Shan tsked as Makoto ran over, but not loudly. The young ninja probably didn’t even hear him do it. “I had some other affairs to take care of first. The Turtles took a little longer than I expected. Hell, still haven’t mastered the ability.”

Shan, of course, spoke of Sage Mode granted to him through the turtles that he had a blood contract with which would allow him to summon them. “Shall we go somewhere more…private?”
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Jul 31 2018, 21:32

"Turtles?” Makoto would quickly dismiss whatever Shan was talking about, he had business. That was all he needed to remember. “Right, so. Follow me. I know a place outside the village that should be good enough for us.” With that said, Makoto would then gesture to his right and then proceeded to walk that way. Hopefully Shan would follow.

The snow haired boy couldn’t help but start to get excited, it caused him to inadvertently smile. This technique, he could only imagine what he could use it for. Personally, he wanted to use it so he could be in multiple places at once. Maybe he could even use it in training against his father.

Makoto then turned to look at Shan “So, where did you learn this special technique? You mentioned Konoha I think?”
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Wed Aug 01 2018, 21:48

Shan followed Makoto and watched the boy smile. A smile. How long had it been since Shandian last smiled?

Too long. Eventually, they made their way out of Kiri and to an empty glade in the middle of a forest. It was here that Shan put his hands together. “Taijuu Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!” He yelled.

A hundred clones burst forth from all around him. “These are Shadow Clones. I didn’t answer your question earlier because I felt it needed a proper explanation. They are a Kinjutsu stored by Konoha due to the immense amount of chakra it can take. This is one of two jutsu I learned from the scroll before I had to leave the room. Right now…”

Shan channeled ration in his hands – all 200 of them. It wasn’t much, but it showed how much chakra he had left with this many clones active. “I have very little chakra. The best application tends to be to have around ten clones out at one time. These clones aren’t like the clones you are used to. They have actual bodies and you remember everything they do – once they disappear.

[190 Words: Training Raiton X4, Clones, weights]

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Wed Aug 01 2018, 21:48

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Sat Aug 04 2018, 20:33

Makoto’s eyes widened with surprise at Shan summoned his clones. He then pinched himself, confirming that what he was seeing was probably real. “Konoha’s really got some great stuff hidden away, huh?” The fact that they could just, make an army of clones was just crazy! With this many, you could probably beat up most enemies with just taijutsu! He definitely had to learn this tech!

He approached one of the Shan’s, he didn’t actually know which one was the real deal, and he tapped its shoulder. “So, when are we gonna start learning how this works? I’m pretty sold.”

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Sun Aug 05 2018, 18:20

“We can start now.” The Shan that Makoto had been talking to said as he made the hand sign for Shadow Clones and held it. The real Shan released the other clones – leaving only the one that was modeling the hand sign. “This is the sign that you use to make the clones. It’s a fairly simple jutsu – truth be told – as it’s essentially the same as making the clones you would have learned in the Academy. The difference is in the sign. This allows the clones to take physical shape. The difficulty in this jutsu lies more in practicing and achieving a large amount of clones – and then using it strategically as the clones take a large amount of chakra. It’s as if you divided your chakra by the number of clones you created – though you do get to manipulate how much chakra each clone gets.”
 
Shan spoke to Makoto calmly, waiting for him to try the jutsu himself. Little did shan know, there were two ninja with eyes just like Shan’s waiting in the trees.

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Aug 07 2018, 13:51

“Right… Yeah. Just like the clones I learned in the Academy.” Makoto sheepishly replied, he also gave a weak smile. An attempt to look confident if anything. While he was sure that he was very much capable of doing the physical parts of being a ninja. His father made sure of that. Makoto had… kinda blanked out during some of his classes. Specifically the techniques that he deemed ‘boring’ or ‘not useful.’ One of those were the regular Clone Technique.

What? All it did was mimic you? What the hell could you possibly use that for?

That decision was coming back to haunt him it seems… Makoto would bring his hands together and performed the sign. “Alright, here I go!” Makoto then started to concentrate on making a clone and… Nothing happened? The snow haired boy blinked, and then tried again. Nothing happened.

He looked to Shan “Just gimme a sec, I’ve uh… Gotten so used to higher level stuff that I forgot how to do the Clone stuff. I’ll get it right soon.” Makoto would then go back to focusing on the technique.

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Aug 07 2018, 14:17

Shan watched Makoto attempt to make a clone, but didn’t judge. He needed this boy’s help, even if he was still an Academy Student. Actually, if he was an Academy Student…had he learned the clone jutsu yet? It was possible that he had yet to learn how to do it and if so…then Shan had just wasted time trying to explain the Clone jutsu as being similar to the weaker version taught in the Academy.
 
Now, he did sigh. He had failed as a mentor. Not much got to Shan emotionally, but his own failures were one of the few things that could cause him distress.
 
“Okay, listen. The chakra needs to be divided evenly through your body when you cast the jutsu. It won’t work if it isn’t, as the chakra needs to be able to create a duplicate of you. Try to focus on your chakra in that way before you do it this next time.” Shan advised, hoping that he explained it accurately. It was so much easier to just read the scroll, but sadly the scroll wasn’t here so they would have to make do.
 

Just then, a kunai flew at Makoto’s head.

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Aug 07 2018, 17:15

Makoto would be concentrating really hard, trying to get his chakra to make a clone. Which wasn’t really going well. All he was doing was thinking “Make a Clone” to himself while flaring his chakra. And even that wasn’t really all that good, all he was doing was making his skin buzz a bit. Was that even what chakra did? He brought his hands apart for a moment and sighed, and then ruffled his pristine white locks.

The boy would look at Shan as he started to explain, and he nodded rapidly as he went on. “Alright, sounds easy enough. I’ll be making more clones than you in no time!” The Junpaku then went back to concentrating, he had to spread the chakra throughout his entire body huh? Makoto closed his eyes and started to concentrate on his chakra flow. Most of it had been kinda scattered, so he just had to figure it out how to get it all around his body.

He took a deep breath and visualized his chakra starting to spread, from the top of his head to the soles of feet. Visualizing it was easy enough, actually doing it was a much different challenge. But eventually he managed something like it in his eyes.

And so he opened his eyes and activated the technique!

It created a kinda… dead clone. Which quickly disappeared. That’s probably how Makoto would be if that kunai hit.

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Aug 07 2018, 22:04

Shan noticed the movement out of the corner of his eyes. The lightning flashed within his eyes as he activated the Raidengan. Everything seemed to slow down. Shan whipped his own kunai out and quickly threw it – knocking the one aimed for Makoto out of the sky.
 
Then, he turned towards where the Kunai was thrown. Two people jumped out of the trees. They both had blonde hair and eyes to match Shan’s. Raidengan. The eye wasn’t a common feature of his clan, so he couldn’t help but be amazed that he found two users here in Kiri. What’s more was that he didn’t know who either of them were, though they both wore Kiri headbands.
 
“Shandian Hiraishin? Who is this with you? Are you teaching secrets of our clan to this outsider?” The younger of the two spoke as he walked forwards. “I don’t know what you think you can teach this  person as he doesn’t have a Raidengan, but I assure you that I won’t let it happen. I’ll kill him while my mentor destroys you. See, we don’t take kindly to people leaving with village secrets.”
 
Shan paused as he listened to him. He wasn’t far off base, even though Shan was teaching Konoha secrets to Makoto. Then, he smiled. Stress. Perhaps this would help teach Makoto.
 
“Makoto, you handle him. Those eyes allow him to keep track of everything within his vision. You won’t stand a chance if you don’t get a functional clone.”
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Fri Aug 10 2018, 21:58

Makoto would be quite surprised when two ninjas just came out of nowhere, and started to talk about clan secrets and all that. At first, Makoto was scared about them sporting headbands of his village. But he quickly pieced together a theory in his head, disguises so that they wouldn’t cause a stir when they came for their Kumo compadre? Or maybe, they were spies.

Either way, they wanted him dead just because he wanted to know some KONOHA secrets. Were these guys even paying attention? Or did they just rush in and assume what was going on?
If it was the latter, Makoto would have to grade them as terrible ninjas.

“Alright, I just gotta make a clone to beat him? That sounds easy!” The snow haired boy would then bring his hands together once more and gathered his chakra. “Here I go!” He then created another clone! This time it looked a little better, but uh… it was half Makoto’s size. It then disappeared in a few moments.

Makoto would then look at the ninja that declared that he would kill him. “Hey, third time’s the cha-” The boy got punched in the face for his troubles.

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Sun Aug 12 2018, 13:04

“Those headbands are stolen, right?” Shan said facing the stronger of the two shinobi. It was a bulky ninja who approached Shan.
 
Unfortunate, the Raidengan worked best with speed. It didn’t matter how much you saw if you couldn’t react to it. Shan pulled out his Spectral bow and fired an arrow. The arrow was made of chakra, or spirit. It was something semi ethereal at the very least.
 
The arrow pierced the man’s shoulder, though he clearly tried to move to dodge it. Shan was just too fast. “Makoto. Concentrate. Once your clone is up, you need to surround him. He can see everything. There isn’t an eye out there that has pure vision abilities better. However, it doesn’t increase his reaction speed. Just overwhelm him.”
Shan fired another arrow. This one landed in the Mentor’s head and dropped him.
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Tue Aug 14 2018, 17:38

Makoto rolled across the ground, his opponent had apparently decided to give him a small break. He forced himself into a sitting position, and looked to Shan. “You make it sound easy…” The snow haired boy had to admit, he was kind of bad at this whole chakra thing. So maybe… maybe he could just leave it to Shan? He was apparently already done with his opponent.

But at the same time, Makoto had his pride. He wanted to become a cool ninja one day, throw around some real nasty ice techniques. Maybe he’d even rival the Mizukage. But to do that, he needed to become strong. And to get strong now, he needed Shan’s help.
And to get Shan’s help, he needed to kick this guy’s butt!

Now sufficiently motivated, Makoto brought his hands together and focused his chakra… Another poof, and bam! A whole new Makoto was right in front of the boy, arms crossed. The Junpaku would grin ear to ear at this. The clone then turned around and offered a hand to it’s creator. Which Makoto accepted.

“Alright… Let’s try that again.” Makoto brought his hands together, and then created another clone! “Yes! Alright boys, let’s get him!”

And then they beat the crap out of the other ninja.

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Thu Aug 16 2018, 20:07









Shan placed his hands together and shouted “Taijuu Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!”. AS he did so, one hundred clones appeared from thin air and surrounded the area.

“You have one option. Tell me which village really sent you and I won’t…” Shan trailed off as the ninja’s disappeared in a flash of lightning. Well, that was anticlimactic.

“You did good. You’ve got the basics down. It may take a minute before you can use more than one clone at once, but you’ll get it. Would you like to join my group…I’m going to call it Tartarus.”
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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Fri Aug 17 2018, 22:57

Makoto turned to Shan, and considered his offer for a few moments. Shan HAD taught him the cool clone tech, plus he didn’t seem too bad. Though he was being hunted by some ninja clan… He looked at the blonde boy and then closed his eyes. Would it be a good idea to join this Ta-something group?

Makoto then opened them suddenly and answered “Alright! I’ll join your tatoros group.” Makoto figured that if he stuck with Shan, he’d get a chance to get stronger. Maybe even get a shot at some real fame! The boy ended up grinning without realizing it.

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PostSubject: Re: Too Many Makotos   Fri Aug 17 2018, 23:05

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