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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 15:58

Toshi and Yoh both looked at one another confused for a moment but then Toshi pointed at th eHyuuga.

Toshi: "Are you stupid or something I think I explained to the point bird boy over here understood it."

Yoh: "I grasp only the concept of the attack and how it works from what you explained but that does not mean I truly understand how to use it because of how you are using chakra outward like so."

Shrugging to that Toshi shook his head and started to speak with the boy but stared at him with a bit of a tilted head.

Toshi: "Look just spin and then add a saw blade think you can do that, if not then you are pretty hopeless for the Hyuuga clan after all."
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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 21:16

"Sorry..." Shao said, feeling a bit dejected. He had been trying to wrap his brain over this. Normally it was straight forward but Toshi's style was something he was not familiar with or even able to navigate due to the complexity of the air movement.

However... when he called Shao hopeless, that urged him to glare angrily at Toshi. His Byakkugan flared up right then and there. "What...?" he said darkly. "You... just watch then. and hope I don't use it against you. You jerk!"

He stormed off a few feet ahead, and soon took the stance. He focused his chakra and it began to let out a light breeze around him. The flow began to churn with his anger-- his own fury, like a brewing storm. His eyes widened to reveal his Byakkugan. "Wind Style.... Eight Trigrams..." he breathed, mustering all hsi chakra to do it right. "ROTATION!!"

The spin was violent and moved just as quickly-- but the difference was he extended the wind change to the motion-- moving in opposing direction. And then it happened. The twirl caused a violent slashing movement that made whistling noice. It spun so wildly, it the slicing sound could be heard--- it took shao a moment as the sounds came in and out, but as leaves moved through the wind, the spare pieces of leaves and grass were sliced by the wind, sending bits into the air and away in the wind.

He stopped-- now deep groves into the soil below him from his rotation, far deeper than before. He huffed and puffed, exhausted from his furious driven Rotation.

"D-don't you dare... insult me..." he said, "I may not be the best Hyuuga... but I am a far better ninja than most. Don't you dare call me that again, you jerk!"

Toshi seemed to strike a nerve in him, and now torn between tears and rage... and a ninja would never be seen to cry.


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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 21:36

Toshi watched the anger flow outward from the boy. But it left a mark on Toshi as the ground was cut and destroyed by the rotation to which even though he was called a jerk Toshi shook his head.

Toshi: "You left things....you have to erase it from...if that is the best of your rotation. Then give up calling yourself a ninja in general. Because I can tell you now...you are no where near far better than anyone with your skill level."

The anger the rage that was burning, why place more wood into the flames. It was something that Toshi knew more than anyone but turned to see Yoh whom was nodding turning away walking towards the other side of the river bed to have only the two Hyuugas remain.
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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 21:47

The word shook Shao to the core... there was some truth to it. The same attitude, the same judgemental gaze... It was the same as his father. IT was the breaking point-- the pain right then and there. The pain he wanted to avoid now gone right out and found him in this person.

The veins in his eyes looked almost demonic with pain and anger. "How dare you... " he breathed... a lone tear falling, but that was all that fell. "You're wrong... You couldn't be more wrong. "

Chakra suddenly violently reached to Shao's hands, and once again wind chakra surged around him. "I don't care what you say.. you know nothing... I know what i am.." he snarled, and finally glared up. "I AM a shinobi!!"

IT was then he charged. Furious, tormented and now having a target for all that pent up anger. The resentment he had for his father for the same judgemental talk now boiled over. "GHRRAAAA!" He roared and released a series of blows towards Toshi.

He worked to deliver strikes-- but the strikes not in strength but to smash the chakra right out of him, should he land the blows. He was just a kid. An 11 year old kid thrown into becoming a shinobi-- and now the Hyuuga provoked him further when he was trying his best.


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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 22:46

The anger finally released Toshi shook his head as he closed his eyes then opened them to only mumble, "pathetic child." With that the lock onto the movement of the child would let Toshi suddenly vanish coming from the side and punching him directly in the face. If anything the speed was abnormal for just an average person but even so a bit higher than a shinobi's average speed.

Toshi: "Lesson 1...control thy self control thy power, you won't be able to dodge me with my speed. Consider that a warning. Seeing as I showed you how to perform each of my techniques then you turn and attack me. You cannot call yourself a shinobi...in a mission if someone died you would lose to your own rage and get yourself killed if not your entire squad. Shape up..."

Yoh would continue to watch as the moonlight stilled shined down on them. Closing his eyes he shook his head. Then continued to keep track of everyone. Toshi turned to look over at Yoh before turning back to the kid.

Toshi: "You better not fuck up in the exams...if you do then I'll be sure to end you personally."

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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 22:52

The sudden move shocked Shao-- even his Byakkugan was fooled as he hit nothing but air. It was that moment his blind anger took over-- that he pretty much had already lost. The simple move was a good start to rattle Shao back into coherence, but it still hurt badly for a kid.

The words stung... and even stung more that he was right. Shao stopped, he had enough sense to do that. Still he didn't move now-- the anger gone as he realized he was talking to a superior shinobi. "Y-you're right. But-- I'm I'm not pathetic. I can do better. You have no right to tell me to give up," he said and turned around, still glaring daggers. "I will pass the exams. Just you wait. "

It was then that Shao did something-- the sudden calm and determination-- his chakra responded, but this time the wind of his Rotation seemed to come again-- and this time, the repulse wasn't a simple slice,but a jagged slash.

The chakra had activated, and done what Toshi had described. The grass around him now atomized...


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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 23:02

Toshi sighed watching as the technique and been performed finally. But that took more time then it should. It did not take much time for Toshi to take a step closer to view the damage and how it was controlled finally. Though it was time for the next part of the test.

Toshi: "Nice, now you got the rotation down, and I will tell you to give up if I know you are going to get others killed. You may be smart, but I will be damned if you are so smart you cannot shut up and follow simple instructions on certain things before that anger flares out of control again. Now perform the next move I showed you which destroyed that tree with a single punch."

He knew that being truthful was going to be hard but still if one cannot survive the pain of life. Then they will never survive the battlefield that is to come.
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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 23:13

Shao took a moment and took a breath. As much as it pained him, he was right. ANd he had to face it. The anger he felt was going to get him killed-- and if not it would get Kyle and Mari killed. That fact sobered out his anger well more than any scolding. If he let them down, that would be worse.

He wanted to apologize, glaring at Toshi--- but said nothing. He figured the best apology would be actually doing the jutsu itself.

Shao took a stance and looked to a the only nearby tree left. He took a deep breath and brought his arm back-- following the same motions that Toshi had done. THe order took Shao a moment to remember, but soon his chakra buzzed in his arm and palm.

"HAAA!!" He charged and delivered a series of thrusts and blows against the bark of the tree. The change in wind to influence the air. He remembered the vibration, but the chaotic pull, push and force of wind used to put into multiple directions that caused the burn.

The resulting air strike heated up in front of his face, and soon caused the resulting wood to first crumble-- then incinerate with a mighty gust of air in front of him. The 'dust cloud' was actually smoke, the ground now heated from the friction and scorching air.

Shao's arms trembled a bit now-- not having exerted his chakra or his arm like that before. It somewhat terrified him to see the effect that wind style could produce such an effect. Far more than what he studied on his own.

The tree in front of him had been desomated. Only a few bits of ashes drifted out of the air he missed-- but the majority of the trunk and roots were gone, scorch marks in their place.




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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 23:14

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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 23:39

Toshi glanced over and nodded nice he had learned how to use it multiple bursts now the hard trick was using as a single without blowing off his own arm.

Toshi: "Nicely done, now do it a single use this time. Careful though if you put too much or too little of any direction, well you can kiss that whole arm goodbye."

Smiling Toshi turned to see the results of the final technique.
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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Thu Jul 19 2018, 23:49

Shao paused as he felt the fatigue already pinch at his muscles and tendents. It was a difficult move for him-- as Taijutsu was not his forte. He turned up to look at Toshi-- the fact he was able to perform the new jutsu better meant there was some hope. Shao really had no anger against Toshi-- just annoyed that how he hid himself from when they first met.

"May I ask you a personal question?" Shao asked, taking a small break to ask. "This is a powerful move and a potential double-edge sword of a jutsu. How come it isn't forbidden?" he asked.

Still, he would do as told and perform the jutsu a second time. This time he did it on the only thing left-- the stones that kept the river bank in place-- and led to the stairs that went up to the road. Shao once again focused his chakra, now starting to wane due to exhaustion from so many rotations and failed attempts of this jutsu. He took a deep breath and remembered to not use the force too much. It was the gentle fist after all.

This time as he charged forward-- his air infused blows hit the stone-- and now were completely slicing and atomizing the stone and into the ground behind it. The blows came faster this time, as Shao was putting less force into his blows and more accuracy-- and that seemed to be the trick. The 'smoke' soon drifted off, and caused Shao to cough. It was more like atomized stone dust as he looked-- and found a perfectly spherical hole now in the stone roughly the size of a person. The inside had been smoothed, like someone had sanded it and minor grazes to the edges of the stone where seperated the wall.


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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Fri Jul 20 2018, 00:04

Turning to the face Shao; Toshi could only smirk at the question before answering. He knew why it was not considered a double edge sword only to Shao it was.

Toshi: "Because, if you do not train the body right it will destroy you. Also because this is only the adept version I have several more that I'm not going to just teach."

He continued to watch the Hyuuga progress for the training. Toshi felt he had some what learned how to use the techniques before long he nodded.

Toshi: "So you learned, Revolving Hell Downburst, Sixty Four Downburst Fist, and finally the Downburst Hell Vacuum First. Each one on their own can do some damage. But there are more ways to improve them however that is for me as I found my own path. Now I did what you wanted to train and get better at, but you are going to need more training before your exams."
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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Fri Jul 20 2018, 00:12

Shao nodded, understanding what he meant. In a way Shao somewhat understood. This was what he was seeking-- a new spin to the gentle fist style of the clan. The same he was trying to do all on his own. He had to wonder how long Toshi worked to develop this new style of the Gentle Fist.

He heard Toshi and Shao turned to him. He understood. Still, he bowed deeply as if he was to Yasha sensei. "Thank you..." he said humbly and kept his head low. "Um... and I am sorry, for my outburst. It was wrong. You were 100% right about what you said... but I will become a worthy SHinobi. I can promise you that, sir..." he said to try and be respectful. The words hurt but it was a good pain that made Shao retain his true strength.

The last move was the Downburst Hell Vaccume First. That one didn't make sense-- because Shao had not even learned the Vaccume Fist at all till now. "If I may inquire, could you explain what you are doing for the last one. Is it the same as the Sixty Four Fist?" he asked.


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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Fri Jul 20 2018, 00:16

Toshi waved his hand not worried about what was said or what had happen between the two. He then heard how the last technique was performed.

Toshi: "As I explained before, the sixty four fist downburst is just the Downburst hell vacuum just you performing 64 times instead of once, so the last way of doing it just instead of punching 64 times just do it one time. Got it?"

Toshi turned to see that Yoh was heading off to another location which made since as it was about that time for them as well to head out.
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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Fri Jul 20 2018, 00:21

The sixty four fist-- combined in one single motion. That seemed hard to get Shao's head around, but he seen Toshi do it. He looked at his own fist, and worked to manipulate the chakra. If he couldn't use his physical hands to cast the palm in the same order and method Toshi described-- and in one fist, that was the point-- he had to depend on chakra alone.

Shao was nearly out of chakra, and he wasn't sure how much more he could muster. He took a deep breath and focued on a spot on the ground to do it. With another short cry, he shot his fist forward, the wind chakra expelled from his palm and arm now moving in the same directions that Toshi discribed.

They moved as a directed wave at the target-- till it made contact. The ground literally erupted with the smoke and searing of the ground, leaving a large ditch that smoldered as if a miniature meteor had hit.



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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Fri Jul 20 2018, 00:30

Toshi smiled after seeing the destruction from the technique and with that turned to get ready to leave as he whistled over for Yoh before the man was from sight.

Toshi: "Well good luck...hope to see you in action and see how well you do in the exams."

Toshi smiled as he turned walking away with his hands within his pockets before thinking about it taking his hands and forming wind around them but then closed his eyes to see the sparks come from it. He then would mumble, "Maybe next time..."

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PostSubject: Re: A leaf in the wind (Training -Invite to Grave)    Fri Jul 20 2018, 00:50

Shao huffed and puffed as he regained his energy-- his chakra completely drained. He wanted to fall to sleep on the grass. He heard Toshi's words, but before he could give proper thanks for his help, he turned to leave. But he said good luck to him, and said they "Maybe next time".

Toshi vanished from view.

Shao was left alone as he now looked around at what he did. The gentle fist turned to a new offensive power. It was not to his own personal style but formidable. It was the power of wind change in chakra nature, and now he had a real example how it mixed with the gentle fist.

It was through this that his true learning how to apply the wind style to his own gentle fist would begin...

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Fuuton - Wind Style - Sixteen Trigams - Downburst Hell Vacuum First
> Adding wind chakra one is able to release a powerful burst of wind. To kill the impact of incoming attacks only to generate fricition burning anything it touches.
+ Chakra + Stamina Cost: -38%
+ Type: Offensive + Defensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: DMG x1.30 | Counter: Target's DMG -35% | Causes Grade 2 Burn
+ Creator: Hyuuga Toshi

Fuuton - Wind Style - Kaijigoku Daunbāsuto - "Revolving Hell Downburst"
> The finished development of Revolving Hell. Releasing chakra of an element with the use of one's speed it creates a powerful burst of wind and damage. Now with the focus of rotation added with the chakra of wind this power is dangerous on its own. As the wind creates razor blades that cut the target's cells.
+ Chakra + Stamina Cost: -35%
+ Type: Offensive + Defensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: Blocked DMG + Damage = DEX | -15% Max Chakra on Target. [Can be healed]
+ Creator: Hyuuga Toshi

Fuuton - Wind Style - Sixteen Trigrams - Sixty Four Downburst Fists
> Using the chakra of wind, it cups around one's fists until released. As it fires it releases power burst that cut into its target dealing heavy damage. It leaves its opponent weaken far worse then its predessors.
+ Chakra + Stamina Cost: -28%
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: ?
+ Effect: DMG = DEX | Target - Cannot exceed 32% Chakra [Until Healed] | 32% Damage = Direct Damage
+ Creator: Hyuuga Toshi


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