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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Jul 06 2017, 19:20

+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 3 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Fri Jul 07 2017, 11:37

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Due to a misunderstanding that -- i cannot make ninjutsu that truly do anything to enemy chakra network-- so I need to fix some jutsu including its parent ones that work on it. Along with other jutsu that were poorly constructed after new rules.

Also know-- the Taiyou Chakra Modes in here, I am trying to follow the new rule but give the new jutsu a power to be added to the first. If possible great-- if not, lets try to slowly work it out. Thank you.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Wed Jul 12 2017, 22:31

Bump . please go over


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sun Jul 16 2017, 19:20

bump again damnit


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Mon Jul 17 2017, 16:59

>_> Really...I should just let it be I told you I was in a lot of pain and I'd post up as soon as I could what needed to be worked.

4.< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala >
> Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A
+ Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is reflected at them as damage OR difference added to defending user’s stamina.
+ Drawback:
+ AP: 500

1. wtf?! If it blocks all Damage to my MAX stamina, then it be fine, BUT if my attack damage is lower than my stamina it be pointless, cause then it bounces back my END would cover the difference. But at the same time if my damage is being blocked by again "MY" stamina then how are you taking the difference and adding it to you if you bounced it back at me?!?!

5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - >
> The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A
+ Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal. Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) and can't be destroyed unless taking +3000 DMG + Immune to Piercing status/Auto destroy barrier jutsu.
+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE.
+Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken).
AP: 500

1. Blocking can equal Caster's END x2 which is fine, however the damage it can block is also how strong the barrier would be so +3000 DMG would not be needed. Also it would not be able to stop piercing damage or auto destroy things because one if one is able to pierce through the barrier which again is still END they could. Like Chidori cutting through a door, BUT I do not see a problem with it, because again the barrier can be destroyed.

2.+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE. Change that....to while inside, NE Absorption Per turn is 25% Max NE.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Mon Jul 17 2017, 18:24

OKay got rid of jutsu damage reflection.

< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala >
> Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A
+ Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is added to defending user’s stamina.
+ Drawback:
+ AP: 500

5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - >
> The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A
+ Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal (Crystal must be broken first to attack enemy). Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) + Piercing status = Breaks Barrier only (separate action) .
+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 25% Max NE.
+Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken).
AP: 500



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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Wed Jul 19 2017, 18:41

Very well designed techniques, I shall allow them.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Wed Jul 19 2017, 18:41

Thank you ^^


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Jul 22 2017, 17:59

Sellling Jutsu number 4 to site. Rest are Hijutsu. Also made items in below section. Number 3 is a bit extreme and willing to make it consume all slots if not allowed but let me know if its possible or not.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Jul 29 2017, 23:36

1. + - Yoton: Hikari Kage Bunshin No Jutsu - Shining Shadow Clone Jutsu - > Shadow Clones to not have 100% of a characters Base Attributes that would have to be lowered to be 25%, as well the Clones HP = their Chakra no matter what cause if they take damage they would vanish so they would not matter having a HP bar.
> Using the power of Yang Release, fully realized how it reflects the physical life force of a person, Asura had adapted the same elemental power into the Shadow Clone jutsu. As a result, his clones become so developed, it is impossible to tell them apart from the original. Even a doujutsu can't distinguish the real from the fake. The clones possess the same physical traits and strengths of the original. However, the caster cannot create as many clones as to the traditional shadow clone technique.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: "X" Chakra / [# Clones] & Chakra Cost x.45
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A
+ Effect: Clones = 100% Base (Nexus Attributes) + Chakra X 2= HP + ["X" Chakra] Split evenly among clones + -1 Action = -1 to 10 Clones to Counter Action. Max: 20 Clones
Creator: Asura Jiin
AP: 500

2.+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - >
> A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength.
+ Stamina Cost: 200
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Damage + Effect: 120 + Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able)
+ Drawback: - - None - -
+ Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
AP: 300

3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun >
> After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350
+ Type: Offense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S
+ Effects: Damage = Target’s Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. < Be advice wise its not a bad idea but since you are performing the attack why not have its damage equal to your stamina?
+Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.)
+Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
+AP: 600

4. + - Rocket Uppercut - > <- This could honestly be a D Rank or even lower to save up on cost of Stamina.
> A great forces backs the fist of the fighter as he pushes all his energy into a drive forward. Once at the right angle, he drives his whole body up to deliver a powerful upper-cut that strikes the opponenet's jaw. The blow is so fast and powerful, it is known to launch people clear into the air.
+ Stamina Cost: 200
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Damage + Effect: 180 + Airborne status
+ Drawback: +1 Stress

5 . + - Yoton: Yoake Rasengan - Dawn Spiraling Sphere - >
> A version of the Rasengan transformed by the life-defining properties of Yang Release. The sphere bright light becomes even brighter and almost pure white in appearance. The physically manifested chakra of the famous jutsu is adapted to manifest the physical energy of the caster. The jutsu compresses so much energy, if released, it can be transformed into a massive beam of chakra that can decimate an opponent from far range--viewable from afar similar to a sunrise.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 252
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A
+ Damage: Damage = (User's Stamina + HP) + Damage dealt against enemy's original End (negate status boost).
+Conditions and Restrictions: To Flow Chakra raise in End does not get negated.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
AP: 600


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Mon Jul 31 2017, 10:59

Thank you for coming back to this-- A few questions.

Reason I did the Yang release clones for 100% nexus stats, because I thought being about the physical side of things, I thought clones with the full physical attributes of the caster would be doable. You are sure this wont work? If not, ill scrap the idea ><

As for Shin Amateratsu-- well my understanding is that Inferno Release for damage is solely reflected upon enemy's physical energy right? ALl the other inferno release on site do damage by enemy's physical energy? Why would you want me to make it my own instead? I could do it, but when facing a stronger enemy than myself, that would be more better? Could you explain your reasoning before I change it?

I assume the rests are okay that you did not comment on. But let me know if any changes. Only thing i need to confirm is the clone idea and the Shin Amateratsu.

The other Jutsu:

2.+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - >
> A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength.
+ Stamina Cost: 200
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Damage + Effect: 120 + Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able)
+ Drawback: - - None - -
+ Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
AP: 300

3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun >
> After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350
+ Type: Offense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S
+ Effects: Damage = Target’s Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. < Be advice wise its not a bad idea but since you are performing the attack why not have its damage equal to your stamina?
+Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.)
+Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
+AP: 600

4. + - Rocket Uppercut - >
> A great forces backs the fist of the fighter as he pushes all his energy into a drive forward. Once at the right angle, he drives his whole body up to deliver a powerful upper-cut that strikes the opponenet's jaw. The blow is so fast and powerful, it is known to launch people clear into the air.
+ Stamina Cost: 120
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: D
+ Damage + Effect: 180 + Airborne status
+ Drawback: +1 Stress

5 . + - Yoton: Yoake Rasengan - Dawn Spiraling Sphere - >
> A version of the Rasengan transformed by the life-defining properties of Yang Release. The sphere bright light becomes even brighter and almost pure white in appearance. The physically manifested chakra of the famous jutsu is adapted to manifest the physical energy of the caster. The jutsu compresses so much energy, if released, it can be transformed into a massive beam of chakra that can decimate an opponent from far range--viewable from afar similar to a sunrise.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 252
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A
+ Damage: Damage = (User's Stamina + HP) + Damage dealt against enemy's original End (negate status boost).
+Conditions and Restrictions: To Flow Chakra raise in End does not get negated.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
AP: 600



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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Mon Jul 31 2017, 11:28

Also don't forget my blue prints please ><


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Mon Jul 31 2017, 12:25

With them having a physical element being used on to them I wouldn't allow them to even hit higher than the regular shadow clones, as again its just a shadow of that element when having an element coming into play. So they may get a boost to where not 100% but like another 15% is added onto their attributes using the base effect of the actual shadow clone technique.

Reason for the advice of having it strike your opponent using your max stamina, as youre performing the attack who's to say that an enemy is going to have higher stamina to which you perform this technique and they have something to heal when taking damage or gain something back that is equal to the damage they are getting?

So that could leave you in a hole with you helping them in the end instead of helping yourself.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Mon Jul 31 2017, 12:53

1, sorry about the message on PM but i digress.

2-- okay so Ill scrap the clone idea and come back to it some other time.

As for the Shin Amateratsu, I understand your point of view. I never thought that would happen when the jutsu is based on an enemy's stats. Anyway Ill use that then. Thanks.

3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun >
> After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350
+ Type: Offense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S
+ Effects: Damage = Caster's Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn.
+Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.)
+Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
+AP: 600

Let me know if its all cool now.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Aug 03 2017, 16:32

Awesome job, I'll be reviewing over the Blueprints tonight for sure as I'm also working on a few other things tonight.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sun Aug 06 2017, 11:00

Okay, ill await the blueprints please.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sun Aug 27 2017, 09:23

Bump man . please


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Jun 14 2018, 00:11

New jutsu approval-- Requiring approval of the updated stats and jutsu since redo for upcoming battle.

[Image - Min: 350 x 350 Max: 500 x 500
O Name + Clan: [Alias] Asura Jiin [The Crimson, The Berserker, Wildfire, Enja]
O Spouse: n/a
O Age + D.O.B: 19 + May 15th, 336
- Jounin: 22 (Older)
O Height + Weight: 5’10 + 185
O Eye + Hair Color: Amber “White when angry” | Fiery Red Hair

O Current Location: ?
ooo Birth Country: Earth Country – Missing Nin
ooo Visited Location: Iwa, Konoha, Crescent Moon Island, Road, Sea, Dream Island, Beast, Dragon, Shishen, Shinkoku, Dance

O Occupation 1: Blacksmith – Part Time | Pay Rate: 175 (wc/2000) | +10% Raise every 10 approved blueprints | Work Day: Tu,Thr,Sat
O Occupation 2: Damiyo – Full Time | Pay Rate: 50% Taxes Income from population.

O Total Income: 175 Per 2000 Words | 50% Tax Income Ryo
ooo > Ryo: 15, 190, 974 Ryo
ooo > Memory Fragment: 30,316 / 60,316 MF (100 EXP = 1 MF)
ooo > Ability Pts: 4,220 / 32,195 AP

Ninja Statistics
O Winning Percentage: 75%
- - Fights: 4
- - Win/Losses: 3/1
- - Kills: 1

000 Rep Rank + Points: C [5055/6000]
O Mission(s) Rank D:
O Mission(s) Rank C:
O Mission(s) Rank B:
O Mission(s) Rank A:
O Mission(s) Rank S:
O Quest(s):
O Union:

+ Body Fitting +
O Head Slots:
- Kanji Headband Protector [+15 End]

O Body / Back Slots:
- Hino Kagetsuchi Vest [+70 Dex + Katon DMG +40% [x1.40] | Katon Resistance -40% [x0.40] < Underwent Transformation > Legendary Rarity
- n/a

O Arm Slots:
- Golden Scroll – Uncommon Rarity | Wrist Placement

O Waist Slot:
[Left] - Akatsuki Pouch ?
[Right] – Chunin Pouch

O Legs Slots:
- Advance Kunai/Shuriken Holster [2 X 12 right]
- Golden Temple Wraps ? [+8 Brawn | +10 Dex]

+ Battle Equipment +
- Waist Pouch: Akatsuki Pouch - - L.O.E: (3 Slots | 5 Copies)
- Waist Pouch: Chunin Pouch - - L.O.E (4 Slots | 4 Copies)
O Item(s)
- Smoke Bomb X5
- Water x5
-Jutsu Scroll : (Summoning Rakshasa Brothers X2)

- Genbu Water x1 - 100% HP + Stamina
- Suzaku Feather x1 – Revive 1 target’s HP from 0.
- Byakko Fang x1 – Nexus Attributes +150% (x1.50) and +1 Ex-Attack.

O Tool(s)
Soul Shuriken x24 | DMG = 30% Sanity and Int.

O Weapon(s)
- Soul Tiger Claws – [+8 Brawn | +10 Dex | DMG: 45% Sanity + Int.

+ Attributes +
O Battle Level: 91 | EXP: 2736/9100
ooo Total Experience: 399,529
O Ranking: Academy Jounin
O Character-Type: Asura

O Health Pts: 1031/1031 [+220]

O Chakra Gauge: 100%
O Stamina Gauge: 100%
O Nature Energy: 0%

O Chakra Control: 100%
O Nature Control: 100%
O Bijuu Control: LOCKED

O Brawn: 931 [+100 – Yang Release] (+20 Gear)
O Endurance: 937 [+100 – Yang Release] (+15 Gear)
O Dexterity: 940 [+100 – Yang Release] (+140 Gear)

O Awareness: 874 [+100 – Yang Release]
O Sanity: 922 [+100 – Yang Release]
O Intelligence: 870 [+100 – Yang Release] INT/100 = +9 bonus

O Bijuu Name & Alias:
O Bijuu Elements:

O Kekkei Genkai Name: Tengan of Jiin Clan
---Tengan Mastery: 100%

O Element(s)
+ Element (1):Katon 100% > Enton 100%
+ Element (2): Doton 100% > Shouton 100%
+ Element (3): Yoton 100%
+ Element (4): Youton 100%
+ Element (5): Shounetsuton 100%

+ Abilities / Seeds +
O Ability Max (5/10)
- Katon Resistance: Katon/Katon Mixed DMG -25% | Cannot be burned
- Katon Manipulation: Able to redirect Katon [Fire] attacks up to C-Ranked | Able to use Katon/Katon Combinations with no hand seals.
Costs x2 Chakra to redirect | 23% Tengan Mastery
- Katon Dominance: Katon DMG: +25% (x1.25) | Costs Learning + Using -25% [x0.25]
- Quick Learner – T.Results +2 | INT +20 During Battles
- Heighten Senses (Eyes Lost or Closed) – Nexus Attribute x1.15 | During battle works on 1 Attribute.
Must lose eye sight + Works against “Mist” based techniques that take sight.
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O Seed Limit: (0/3)
- Name - (Gain at Creation)
- Name - (Gain at Chunin)
- Name - (Gain at Jounin)
[Storage]
- Training Dummy
- Training Weight
- “Gold” Fragment (Quest Item) – Strange metal that seems to be humming with a soothing sound. It seems to be calling out to something to what is truly unknown.
- Icha Icha Make Vol 1
- Icha Icha Make Vol 2
- Icha Icha Make Vol 3
- Jutsu Scrolls x6
- Shinkou - Rare Raritry [+12 Brawn |Katon Dmg x1.15 | Katon Resistance x0.15 – When held]
- Shadow Chain Scythe – Super Rarity [+40 Brawn | +20 End |-3 Stealth Dice | Earth DMG x1.15 | Earth Resistance x0.15]
- White Tiger Mask - Super Rarity [ +30 Dex | +20 End | -4 Stealth Dice | Hide Face]
- Carnage – Legendary Rarity [+36 Brawn | DMG: 135 – Trigger: Red Tiger Devil Form] upon death: Revive with 1hp must be holding Carnage.
ooo Red Tiger Devil: -15% Dark Chakra | -7% Dark Chakra Per Turn | Nexus Attributes x1.25 | Chakra transferred becomes Dark Chakra
- Robes of the Fallen Savior “Madara” [DEX x1.25 | Weapon DMG x1.25 | Cannot wear/equip anything but 1 Weapon when worn.
ooo Placement: Body
- Akatuski Robe: +90 Nexus Attributes | Body Placement – Fills all body slots
- Soul Shuriken x26 | DMG = 30% Sanity and Int.
- Shadow Tiger’s Stripes [+55 Dex | -14 Stealth Dice
- Seiryu Tear x1 - +15% Nature Energy
x5 Water Bottle
- World Map
- Bingo Book
- x10 Yellow Flash Kunai
- Blood Contract: Ichibi -Shukaku

+ Tool(s)
- x4 Yang Pouch {DMG = -25 Stamina}
- x1 Yin Tag {DMG = -25 Chakra}
- x5 Tracker
-Spirit Chain Bow
-

+ Kunai & Shuriken Holster
- x4/4 Kunai [10]
- x14/16 Shuriken [10]
- x15 Kunai – Dmg - 10
- x80 Shuriken – Dmg - 10



Jutsu list to fight Houkou:

The Rakshasa Brothers: Bloody Mist and Chigatsumi : A Rank. (Scroll)
(Names still being considered. Using Bloody Mist and Chigatsumi for now)

Both cunning and devious, these two tigers stand out among the others of the Blood Mist Jungle. Unlike many of their peers, they take on more humanoid appearances, standing on two legs but still upholding their tiger like features. Both are dressed and armed as Shinobi, trained in many of their arts. They also have shades of black/dark violet fur with stripes on their bodies. They also wear different color scarves. The two brothers are twins, sharing many traits between them and both enjoy working together, with the occasional competitions between one another. Whether its battle or social events, the two cause trouble wherever they go. The two specialize in stealth and subterfuge tactics, making one of the Tiger tribe's most dangerous warriors.
Summons: 2 B Class Summons.
Chakra Cost: -55% (25% off costs for custom summon= -30% Chakra)
Effect: 2 Summons with +100 of Character Base Attributes
Limit: 20 Turns
Summon Details and Jutsu:
 

Five-Point Seal: Elemental Chaos 1.
> A powerful seal that responds to the presence of chakra nature inside a target. The result of the seal destabilizes the opponent’s strength and abilities, which makes their chakra unstable. The more elements an enemy has, the more the seal wreaks havoc on their chakra network.

+ Chakra: 55%
+ Seal Type: Odd Type: Offense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 (Requires both hands to form) + A class.
+ Effect: When afflicted by seal, target opponent loses 50% of stats based on the following element they possess.
Fire: Lower Strength by 50%
Wind: Lower Dexterity by 50%
Earth: Lower Endurance by 50%
Lightning: Lower Awareness by 50%
Water : Lower Sanity by 50%

+Sp. Effect: If all five effects are active on one target, lower total Chakra by 50%
+Restrictions and Conditions:

+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Shinsei Tora no Tsume 2.
> A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. With careful placement and proper control, one can use the portals to bypass enemy defenses or redirect an enemy's attack. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs.
+Chakra Cost: 35% > Lvl 2 = +15%.
+ Type: Defense, Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + ?
+ Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions
+ Lvl 2: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Turn = Can’t be blocked/reflected.
+ Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipped, forged from Shinkoku territory.
+Creator: Asura Jiin


Aetheric Synergy Seal 3.
> A seal which works by binding a powerful chakra to the caster or designated host. It works by using the elemental chakra natures bound in a target—and uses it to reinforce the strength of the seal. The stronger the chakra, the tighter the seal becomes.

+ Chakra Cost: 55%
+ Seal Type: Odd
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Requires both hands to form) + A class.
+ Effect: Seals Target w/n Object or Person
+ Sp. Effect: For every element a bijuu/chakra being possesses, it takes X number of attempts to unlock or break this seal successfully, where X is the number of elements said chakra being has.

+ - Jungle Beast Shadow- > 4
> Driven by sheer will and the might of an animal, this taijutsu utilizes the utmost dexterity and will of its user to avoid mortal injury. By driving all their muscles into their speed, one can leave an after-image of themselves as they evade harm completely.
+ Stamina Cost: 5%
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Rank: E
+ Damage + Effect: Evade 1 action.
+ Drawback: Dex reduced by .10 for two turns after use.

+ Effect: Ignores enemy defense jutsu OR direct damage to enemy. (One or the other upon situation used)




+ - Firebird Divebomb Blitz - > 6
> A fiery willpower builds up to fuel the Taijutsu user, and sends them forward like a rocket. The user moves in a fast darts of movement around the battlefield to build up momentum—and once at its climax, the person resembles a burning blur like that of a comet. The target darts above the target—and slams down with devastating force.
+ Stamina Cost: 20%
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Effect: Direct Damage + Stun Opponent.
+ Drawback: +1 Stress
+ Requirements: Must have Third True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active.
+Created by: Asura Jiin

+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - > 7
> A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength.
+ Stamina Cost: 20%
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Effect: Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able)
+ Drawback: - - None - -
+ Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body.
+Created by: Asura Jiin

+ - Solar Flare Shuriken - > 8
- With dexterous form and skilled aim, the user throws a series of shuriken upon a target. While the sheer number alone is considerable—the real goal the thrower uses is to catch the sunlight for each shuriken. The result creates a bright flash from all the shuriken that blinds the target and leaves them vulnerable. " The wise shinobi uses the environment to their advantage."
+ Stamina Cost: 20% + Shuriken Used
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Effect: Damage = Shuriken Damage X 1.25 + Blinding Status on enemy = Dice rolls are “Zero” for 3 turns.
+ Drawbacks: Minimum shuriken : 10 + Blind effect negated if no light source is around.

Tengan – Divine Eyes 5
The Tengan is the Doujutsu of the Jiin Clan. It increases their Fire Manipulation abilities and grants them Heat and Thermal Manipulation on top of that.
Chakra: 20% [To Activate] | 10%[Per Turn]
Grants: Thermal Vision | X-Ray Vision | Accelerated Vision
Effect: Dex X1.25 + Awareness X 1.25
Restrictions: Non Jiin Members + X2 to Costs
Unlocked: 25% Tengan Mastery

Tengan: Negate Genjutsu
This ability allows the user to track heat signals thought the Genjutsu, thus cancelling most Genjutsu.
Grants: Immune to S-Ranked Genjutsus or lower
Unlocked: Automatically at 30% Tengan Mastery

Tengan: Thermal Manipulation
One of the most useful abilities of the Jiin Clan is the ability to manipulate their body temperature. They can keep their natural body temperature despite freezing temperatures and even lower their own to hide from thermal detection.
Grants: Immunity to freezing. | Cannot be detected by thermal detection methods.
Unlocked: Automatically at 40% Tengan Mastery

Tengan: Extinguish
This is the ability to lower temperatures of Katon and Katon combinations to the point where they are negated.
Grants: Negates Katon/Katon Combinations.
Costs: X% X=Enemy Jutsu Cost
Rule: Cannot extinguish Cosmic Flames
Unlocked: Automatically at 60% Tengan Mastery







< Tribal Elder: Vidav—“Sage of Wisdom (Emergency revamp version) ” -- S Class. >

+ Summons one of the revered tiger elders. Vidav, the Wise. This summon, despite being one of the oldest and renown for his power, is an anthro tiger and the same height as an average person. He wears a long, deep blue shroud that covers his body and hood that obscures a good part of his face. When he does remove it, it reveals a more sage like attire. A blue and gold adorn tunic and pants. Almost a royal attire with a pendant around his neck. Hidden from that fact, he still has a lean and strong build despite his presumed age. He also wears wrapping bandages around his feet, that reveal more tiger like feet.

He is roughly around 800 years old and was a former boss of the tribe. In one time he was respected and fear for great power, but now in a more ironic twist he is known as compassionate, wise and patient. Far more than Boss Byakko is, and is a reliable council for the tiger leader. He welcomes new comers to the jungle, including humans. He takes great interest in Asura's training and seeks to initiate him into the tribe as a true member, allowing him to be the first human to become a sage to their tribe.


+ Effect: 1 Summon {S} Rank with +200 of Charachter Base Attributes. Possess 1/3 elements: Suiton. Jutsu Focus: Genjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu
+ Chakra Cost: -80% (25% off summoning Cost = -55%)
+ Limit: 10 Turns
[spoiler="Summon Details and Jutsu]
Items held:
+ Kunai Tuning Fork + X 6
An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for humans' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu.
Type: Ninja Tool.
Damage: 20 + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs.

+ Astral Cure Jutsu –
> Vidav enters a calming trance and focuses his chakra to himself or a target. The positive energy flows as chakra and enters the target to revitalize and restore a person’s body. It is similar to the mystic palm technique but radiates easily through the entire body, an evolution to man’s development in medical ninjutsu
+ Chakra Cost: -35%
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + B
+ Effect: Heal X1.30 of HP + Remove one Status Condition.

+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra Cost: -80%
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 3 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

+ Harmonious Soul Salvation - >
> When an ally is influenced by a powerful Genjutsu, Vidav focuses his chakra into the ally’s chakra network. He matches the irregular flow to infiltrate the damaged psyche of the person via their spirit. With that, they can break the Genjutsu and restore the victim’s psyche. It’s a fusion of genjutsu and medical ninjutsu.
+ Chakra Cost: -55%
+ Contact + Type: Sight/Touch + Defense/ Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A
+ Effect: Sanity = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu

+ - Feral Recharge
> Via physical contact, Vidav can manipulate the dorment energy in a person’s body. He can use chakra to manipulate the cells and energy—this in turn gives a person a regeneration of stamina, as well as lessening the stress on the body.
+ Chakra Cost: -35%
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + B rank
+ Effect: Regenerates X1.30 Stamina and lowers stress by -2.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Jun 14 2018, 07:20

If these are the ones we spoke about and seeing you reworked them more then...


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Fri Jul 06 2018, 14:15

(The following stuff is new approval of jutsu for site since the rule changes, including the canon jutsu and custom jutsu.  This is 1 of 3 posts for them all. )

Mantra Awakening:
 

Active Seals on Asura:
 
Summoning Jutsu and Descriptions:
 

Tiger Sage Mode:
 




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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Fri Jul 06 2018, 14:20

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Asura’s Technique Page 2
Jutsu, Techniques and Styles wrote:


Fuinjutsu:
 


Styles:
 
Taijutsu:
 

Genjutsu:
 

Medical Ninjutsu:
 

Bukijutsu :
 

Clan Jutsu and Doujutsu:

Shinkaton : Shinsei Yoroi [Sacred Fire Release : Sacred Armor]
A simple, but useful technique where the user forms an aura of flame around their body to offer protection from physical attacks while at the same time damaging their opponent.
Base Chakra | Stamina Costs: 200 | 130
Hand Seal: 1
Rank: C
Damage | Effect: 120 if touched | Can cause burning
Healing Effect: If used as a healing agent can restore health by 25% of chakra used | Cures Curse and Poison
Rule: Must have 25% Tengan Mastery

Shinkaton : Shinsei Ken [Sacred Fire Release : Sacred Blade]
This technique allows the user to manipulate Sacred Flames into a non-physical sword. Because the blade isn’t physical it can’t stop actual weapons and tools. However, one swipe from this sword will cause flames to engulf their opponent causing severe burns.
Base Chakra | Stamina Costs: 350 | 260
Hand Seal: 3
Rank: B
Damage | Effect: 280 | Can cause burning
Healing Effect: If used as a Healing agent restores health by 50% of chakra used| Cures Burns and Frostbites
Rule: Must have 50% Tengan Mastery

5. Shinkaton: Kaen - Phoenix Art-- Dying Sun Reincarnation!
Draws in smoke and flame, and user erupts into three bolts of black/red flames which rocket into the sky. As they reassemble back into a person several meters up, their body produces powerful red flames as they rocket back towards the ground at a violent speed. The resulting impact causes a massive explosion and flame erupts in all directions. After which, the caster reconstitutes himself from the glowing ashes back into his original form.
+ Chakra Cost: -40%
+ Type: Offensive, Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 + Clan
+ Effect: Damage to all Allies/Enemies & Burning Heal Status (Using the knowledge of Jiin Clan, one is able to recover a small portion of HP and remove Abnormal Status.) (Heal HP x1.25 & -1 Abnormal Status)
+ Creator: Asura Jiin.

Hijutsu:
Spoiler:
 

Special Notes:
+ - Jikukan Manipulation Scroll - >
> Learn the ways of Time and Space, break the rules of it and create a powerful jutsu that goes beyond everything else.
+ Amount: 3/5 - x2 Raijin
+ IC-Knowledge: Learn of Time/Space, Unlocks ability to create Jikukan ninjutsu
+ Restocks: When empty; every 2 weeks on Friday.
+ Restrictions: 5 Jikukan Ninjutsu Per Member.
Space TIme Jutsu: Unlocked to learn.


+ - Chakra Manipulation Scroll - >
> Learn the shape changing or form of chakra, the highest jutsu to show this ability is Rasengan. Master this and create powerful jutsus of chakra manipulation.
+ Amount: Unlimited
+ IC-Knowledge: Learn of Manipulation of Chakra
Charka Manipulation-- Rasengan Knowledge.

+ - Nature Manipulation Scroll - >
> Learn of the five basic elements and create jutsus with this knowledge. The highest jutsu known is Chidori and Raikiri as they are both Lightning Affinities.
+ Amount: Unlimited
+ IC-Knowledge: Learn of Manipulation of Nature
Nature Manipulation: Learn and able to learn nature energy.

+ - Yoton Scroll - >
> Learn of Light style, its powers and its flaws. The light will allow power of physical to increase.
+ Amount: Unlimited
+ IC-Knowledge: Learn of Light Element
Able to eventually learn light jutsu. Quest still required.


+ - The First Shinobi – Rikudou Sage - >
> In legend a man gave his all to spread his religion of, “Ninshu”
+ Amount: Unlimited
+ IC-Knowledge: Learn of Ninshu and the Rikudou Sage
+ Price: 45,000 Ryo

+ Organization: Akatsuki +
x Many criminals exist within the world, however a powerful organization existed only to cause greater damage to the countries.
+ Effect + IC-Knowledge: Learn "Akatsuki Background"
+ Price: 40,000 Ryo


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Mon Jul 09 2018, 21:30

As to the one with a smile,


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Wed Jul 18 2018, 23:41

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Seeking Blueprint and Jutsu approval for Asura.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Jul 19 2018, 00:06

Weapons look great


Jutsu though its going to have to be place,

1. Damage getting a DEX plus a x1.20 increase? That is a bit much.
2. For even losing 20% HP I would have to say it would be 35%
3. By counter do you also cannot evade as well?


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