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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 3 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 23:00

Let me rephrase. First of all, I can't edit my previous application because after a certtain amount of time, you can't edit it. Its just how this stupid site works.

Second, id love for it to be on here, but neither you or Grave were around so he just poked at it and we discussed approachable changes on skype-- which I reposed said jutsu here. I can't help it if some people are too lazy to come on. We need more attendance to this please.

If you want, ill repost the entire jutsu section, but i have to do all the fucking coding again. I am not asking a lot from you to just go back up to a page at least and see the last formated application. Its all there, but I cannot edit it to make it more acceptable.

ALl the posts after that format are corrections.
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Understood its just for future note give me a few and I shall review everything for you.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 3 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 23:06

Thanks-- if there is a way to allow edits easier, see if that can be implimented. but otherwise i gotta keep doing what i done so far to 'change jutsu and make it approvable'


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 3 EmptySat May 20 2017, 00:44

Reposting Jutsu and items YET to be approved. AND you didn't give chakra/stamina costs to approved jutsu!

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =+5
[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

HOpe this one is better.

(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.25 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.25




Also, the Rasengan, you didn't say anything about it so ill repost it here. But look to the spoiler sections in previous posts to see it.

5. + - Doton: Rasengan—Torment of Atlas - >
>A Variation of the Rasengan created by a rogue ninja of Iwa. Named after the Titan, Atlas who was said to hold up the very planet on his back through the sea of chaos as punishment for his crimes. Focusing enhanced earth-chakra into the Rasengan, the chakra becomes denser. Pieces of earth orbit around the sphere and it glows with a darkness like black onyx. This deceptive jutsu takes the form of a powerful attack—but its true power comes in its massive gravity it inflicts upon the target. The infused chakra that makes contact will put so much pressure on the enemy, they won’t be able to lift a finger. A truly fearful jutsu, indeed.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Offense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0+ S+
+ Damage + Effect: 300 + Target’s Nexus Stats reduced by X 0.50 & Target Dice Rolls = 0 for 3 turns.
+ Drawbacks and Restrictions:
+ Parent Jutsu: Rasengan, Doton: Ultimate Lead Body Weight, Doton: Yomi Hasaiki

+ Creator: Asura Jiin

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1. Jian (Chinese Blade)  
A lithe but agile blade that is 12 inches long. its sleek design and balance allows this to be one of the most agile of blades.
Type: Martial
P. Effect: ----
Effect:  30 Dmg +
(Blue Print: X 2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)

2. - Scythe: Flip Blade - >
> Standing with a 12ft pole with two crescent blade on each with each expanding 21in, they are believed to be a tool to be a symbol of “Yin & Yang”
+ Type: Marital
+ P. Effect: ----
+ Damage: 60
(Blue Print:  X 4 Ingots + 3 Gem Slots Optional)

3.Divine Circlet
A small metallic band that is worn over the forehead. Consider a stylish trinket but holds great significance for crafters and monks.
Placement: Head
P. Effect: ---
Blue Print: X1 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)

4.+ - Mask {Unique Design} - >
> Have a design featured on your mask to make it your very own. Special Ops wear ones that are designed based of animals. However, the mask may be designed however the shopper wants.
+ P. Effect: ---
+ Placement: Face

Blue Print ( X 2  Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)

5. War Mask
A mysterious mask that one wears to obscure their identity and fortified to uphold well in combat! Durable and not easy to break. Someone with something to hide.
P. Effect: ---- + Hide Face.
Placement: Face
Blue Print:  X 2 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 3 EmptySat May 20 2017, 11:07

2 4 and 5 Are approved buddy, are these for your character or yourself? just remember what i told you about them for being yourself.

Items are good,

The scythe though should be three ingots and 2 Gems 3 is a bit high.
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2. - Scythe: Flip Blade - >
> Standing with a 12ft pole with two crescent blade on each with each expanding 21in, they are believed to be a tool to be a symbol of “Yin & Yang”
+ Type: Marital
+ P. Effect: ----
+ Damage: ----- (fixing all of them to be blank due to i know better how it works)
(Blue Print: X 4 Ingots + 2 Gem Slots Optional)

Ty for the others and I will apply AP appropriate. Only 2 of em are Hi jutsu.


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Scythe is good btw.
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Sesisme Pulse - 225 | 79

Molten Core - 500 | 325 {325 | 211}

Rasengan - [Never Place S+] 520 | 338

Mud Wall - [310 | 140]

Snip the Web [205]
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 3 EmptySun May 21 2017, 09:47

Due to also, because of some confusion on the occupation section of the job, always remember you have to write a post of you creating these items on the days you work. So here is everything that is owed because I know you have been working on them for a few weeks now.

Paycheck 1750 x Weeks (3) = 5250 x5% Bonus (waiting for Approvals) = 5513

Please note this will be the ONLY time this will be done afterwards if the work isn't done then nothing will happen nor will you gain anything from this.
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undderstood and all added. Ty for your patience with me guys.


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Jutsu and Items for Review (Post for Blacksmithing will be done tomorrow on Tuesday) . Selling Jutsu 2 to site. The rest please evaluate. Personal Sage mode included.

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bump. please look


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Senpou: Youton—Magma Tsunami! (For Site or Character?
- Needs to be a Fuinjutsu if its going to seal. You have Ninjutsu Class correct?
- Needs Costs
- Needs AP Cost (If for Character.)

Shouton: Jade Star Shuriken (For Site or Character?)
- Good just needs to have Costs
- Needs AP Cost (If for character.)

Hei Hu Quan: Tiger Kumite Style
- Good
- Needs AP Cost

War God's Fists-- One thousand Blows
- Good
- Type should be offensive
- Cost is needed.
- Needs AP Cost

Sage Art: Shouton --- Jade Tiger Statues
- Cannot be done, As Nature Energy does not stay collected, it vanishes or diminishes over time or at the end of battle, as it was stated it cannot be collected before a battle for any reason.
- Its best to remove the % and have it use the Nature Scale.
- Needs AP Cost1.

Royal Tiger Claw
- Good


2. Cloth-Scroll Wristband
- Good, but may wanna have it read not cloth.

3.Chained Hammer
- Good, only 1 Gem Slot


4.Triple Blade Scythe
- Good

5.+ - Reinforced Bow - >
- Good, Lower Ingots cost to -2 Ingots
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Changes made here. Please look in spoilers to see them.

Magma Tsunami-- Yes, Asura has the sealing seed. The concept for this is simple. The power of Nature Energy laced into the earth, will naturally form a seal on its own accord. Even though Asura has some sealing knowlege, he doesn't have the aptitutde to do advance onces yet like the 4th hokage and other sealing users. However, applying nature energy to a traditional magma release seemed like a cool idea to justify a seal-- at least to contain something/someone trapped under the molten rock if should they survive.

Jade Star Shuriken-- yes selling to site.

Style and all other requested Hijutsu had APp added, and glad to know I can just spitball costs here from now on.

As for Jade Tiger Statues--- well I'd like to get a full review of this. My goal was to make a new way of gathering nature energy that wasn't a simple 'Clone" method, which is stupid.

My reasons-- 1, Sage Chakra infused Crystal would be able to collect and store nature energy due to the simple fact they are-- indeed-- statues and do not move on their own. The structure of the crystal, the chakra infused, and structure would allow this slow but steady flow and gather. (I am explaining this for Omni since we discussed it on skype earlier, Grave).

Anyway i still wanna use it if we can work out an alternative way to use them to gather nature energy?

Otherwise either approve the rest regarding their costs.


All items are adjusted.

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All's good then expect for the Jade Tiger statues one until we get further results or conformation on it.
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ALright. all approved-- I will just come back to the Jade Statue idea later.


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Another batch of jutsu and items to create and review please. No selling-- just Hi jutsu.

Also added another item I hope no one minds if I make 6? ONly cause i realized how great it could be after seeing a pic of it.

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Bump-- please


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After discussion with Grave on Skype, updated Jutsu list and items.

Remember, the effects of Symbiosis work by selecting only a maximum of 2 to use, and each one count as an action. Not all of them can be used at the same time. Also ideally i want that medical genjutsu removal to be more effective for combat?

Got rid of Trick Room since i don't understand Genjutsu clearly.

ALso since Space+Time Jutsu cannot have more than 3 abilities , making a 6th jutsu to add the ones I need. please pardon me. And correct if wrong but the idea of 3 abilities limited to Time-space seems stupid. ALso please confirm if the Jutsu Must state instant travel for its abilities , or can I just assume and not bother for its effects. Please state it here for the rules.

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For the sake of space and time , gonna post up only the unapproved jutsu here.

1.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - >
> This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?"
+ Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X1.50
+SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated.
+Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha.
+Created by: "Asura Jiin"
AP Cost: 700

2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.
> A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never be killed by conventional methods, which grants the bearer of the mark eternal youth and immortality.
Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none.
Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S
Seal Type: Even
Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate 'near death state'.

No, because that would cause the forms to be broken and the only time the side effects of those were even avoid was during the movie Bonds for Inner Gates and Six Paths wearing off during the battle with Sasuke and Naruto but either or he was still running out of chakra
Sp. Passive Effect: Possessing Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and are Immortal.
Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release.
Ap Cost: 600

Jutsu for Vidav---
Vidav Jutsu wrote:


+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.)  |  Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

++ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >
> Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the caster that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind.  
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325
+ Contact + Type: Sight + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent. Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked. Clone will counter each attack original uses with its own jutsu. Each time a Jutsu is countered and dispelled-- opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack.
+ Limit: 4.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukotsujutsu.

+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis-
> Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211)
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank
+ Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. + Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions.

Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition. > Trade HP or 1 Status Condition to other.
Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress > Trade Stamina w/o Stress


+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of the above options can be used per turn. Options takes a separate action to trigger. + While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. + Reactions used by Vidav causes the jutsu to break, and must be recast if to be used again.

(Redoing this jutsu now that I understand the effects per rank)
5.+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Shinsei Tora no Tsume

> A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. With careful placement and proper control, one can use the portals to bypass enemy defenses or redirect an enemy's attack. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260  > Lvl 2.= X 1.15 cost.
+ Type: Defense, Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + ?
+ Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions
+ Lvl 2: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Can’t be blocked/reflected.
+ Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory.
+Creator: Asura Jiin
AP Cost: 700

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6. Kunai Tuning Fork
An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu.
Type: Ninja Tool.
Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs.
Blue Print X 1____ Ingot + Optional -1 Gem = Makes 3


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Rewriting Yang Seal-- changes made after talk on Discord.

2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.
> A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never age beyond a certain point. They gain eternal youth and infinite longevity.
Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none.
Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S
Seal Type: Even
Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, Chakra Control and status conditions to 100%.(Excludes Near Death State)

Sp. Passive Effect: Possess Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and have infinite longevity. + Adds +3 to Mantra Inner Gates limits.
Restrictions & Requirement: May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Release Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release.
Ap Cost: 600


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The following is me rewriting Vidav summoning jutsu that still needs approving. Now that i understand the limit of S class, i hope this works. Symbiosis i changed to only use one of the selective effects seperated from actions, but now using 1, not 2 out of them. Also chakra upkeep cost is paid by both-- each paying half of the cost to maintain the connection. ANd symbiosis now justified by the caster cannot use other jutsu, so defense of the caster requires aid of the summoner. If that isn't Symbiotic, then what the fuck is?



+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.)  |  Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

+ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >
> Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the target that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind.  
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325
+ Contact + Type: Sight/Touch + Defense/ Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent and Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked by mimicking enemy's jutsu/attack exactly. + Each time a Jutsu is blocked/countered, opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack.
+ Limit: 4.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu.

+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis
> Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including healing wounds, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. However, this jutsu requires great concentration and the caster is unable to use other jutsu to maintain this connection-- leaving protection of the caster up to the summoner who summoned Vidav.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211)
Note: Summon and summoner pays half for upkeep between them to maintain jutsu.
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank
+ Effect: Vidav and the attached target is aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions:

  • Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
  • Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition.
  • Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
  • Regenerates X1.30 Stamina to target + removes -3 stress from target.



+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. To recast, they must pay the original cost all over again. + Only Maximum of 1 of the above options can be used per turn separated from actions.


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Lower Tiger Hypnosis to 3 Turns

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+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 3 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:


Fixed and done-- ty Omni!


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