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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Tue Sep 20 2016, 23:21 | |
| 2.+ - Jungle Beast Shadow- > On Hold > Driven by sheer will and the might of an animal, this taijutsu utilizes the utmost dexterity and will of its user to avoid mortal injury. By driving all their muscles into their speed, one can leave an after-image of themselves as they evade harm completely. + Stamina Cost: + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Rank: A + Damage + Effect: Evade 1 action. + Drawback: Dex reduced by .10 for two turns after use. Is this one Player?
3. + - Blade Dance: Raging Tiger Drill - > Approved > With a dive/drive towards an enemy, while holding one's short sword, the user enters a violent spinning motion-- so fast that it they are a blur and their motion of blade and body forms like a spinning cyclone. They charge at their target, delivering a brutal attack against their enemy so strong it breaks their defense. + Stamina Cost: 500 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Rank: A + Damage + Effect: 250 + Sword Dmg X2 + Enemy END is reduced by 50% . + Requirement + Restriction: Requires The Fighter's Edge - Taiken Style
4.Blind Rage! Approved > Driven by all consuming rage and hate, those under this state will ignore all else and push past pain, hindrances and fear. They will fight even under the most dire of conditions, becoming a juggernaut. + Stamina Cost: 425 + Type: Supplementary + Rank: A + Effects: Ignore drawback effects on Taijutsu moves, stuns and paralysis effects. Excludes effects of Hachimon. +Limit: 4 + Requirement + Restriction: Requires Mantra Release: Wrath. Dex is reduced by X1.15 while active.
These the one you spoke of? because they are on the OLD license board they are not allowed to pay the Ability Points. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Tue Sep 20 2016, 23:30 | |
| Ring of fire can still be a WIP-- due to the fact i can't use it how i wanted. My goal was to make a 'forced confrontation that prevented escape, causing direct confrontation and discouraging 'hiding and evasion". I was NOT aiming for ??? Rank, but i can edit it . Basically for this I guess what i want at least is reduce enemy rolls, prevent escape and damage per reaction used. I can forget burning but its fire-- so i figure burn was possible.
IM glad Armory Exchange and Warrior seal is allowed and you approve of it. Same with Molten Earth Jutsu.
As for Raging Gaia-- um, how would I make that so for an attack. What effect would the terrain have now being turned into a scorching lava? This is suppose to be a form of attack jutsu after all.
YES-- those are the jutsu i was referring to to approve only. THe others you can disregard-- the Original inner gates I already had approved by Grave.
As for Jungle Shadow-- yes, it is player one-- as in the user of this jutsu suffers the reduction in Dex for this. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Sat Sep 24 2016, 18:35 | |
| Raging Gaia the basic idea for it to be a battlefield effect is to actually best way is to show or look over at how like Mist techniques work as they have an Upkeep this keeps the lava on the field cause you are still paying OR reviewing the Suiton - Vomit Water technique I believe its called it was used by Kisame.
Jungle Shadow is good then, so you can have it approved. With it being an A rank its costs will be...415 |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Sat Sep 24 2016, 20:29 | |
| I realize i MIGHT should of make Jungle Shadow lower Rank E--- but its your call for such a jutsu to taijutsu evade an action.
Raging Gaia however, was suppose to be a staple attack. I am not sure how to go about the structure of it. How about this: Does it have to be a lingering effect? I figure the moment the lava stops, the ground itself becomes just black and no longer burns enemy unless designed to.
Rewriting this version:
5.+ - Magma Release: Raging Gaia!- > - The caster slams a punch or stomps his foot into the ground, channeling his chakra into a specific point. At which that point becomes magma in order to shoot up pillars of lava to hit the enemy from in front and below. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) & Rank: 3 & B + Damage + Effect: 180 + Max Burns
Rewrite to Beast Shadow: 2.+ - Jungle Beast Shadow- > > Driven by sheer will and the might of an animal, this taijutsu utilizes the utmost dexterity and will of its user to avoid mortal injury. By driving all their muscles into their speed, one can leave an after-image of themselves as they evade harm completely. + Stamina Cost: + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Rank: E + Damage + Effect: Evade 1 action. + Drawback: Dex reduced by .10 for two turns after use. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Tue Oct 04 2016, 11:31 | |
| 5.+ - Magma Release: Raging Gaia!- > - The caster slams a punch or stomps his foot into the ground, channeling his chakra into a specific point. At which that point becomes magma in order to shoot up pillars of lava to hit the enemy from in front and below. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 310 & 140 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) & Rank: 3 & B + Damage + Effect: 180 + Max Burns
Rewrite to Beast Shadow: 2.+ - Jungle Beast Shadow- > > Driven by sheer will and the might of an animal, this taijutsu utilizes the utmost dexterity and will of its user to avoid mortal injury. By driving all their muscles into their speed, one can leave an after-image of themselves as they evade harm completely. + Stamina Cost: 25 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Rank: E + Damage + Effect: Evade 1 action. + Drawback: Dex reduced by .10 for two turns after use. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Tue Oct 04 2016, 22:01 | |
| Swift Armor Exchange: CC & SC = 300 & 135
Warrior’s Seal CC & SC = 125 & 31
Molten Earth Jutsu CC & SC = 415 & 228 |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri Oct 07 2016, 21:34 | |
| Okay calculating gains via selling jutsu only: 2 B class, 2 A class , 1 E class, 6500 Ryo earned. End of this circle of selling jutsu.
Cost for Original seal -- 200 AP.
All done
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Thu Nov 03 2016, 12:38 | |
| License Registration Form New Jutsu and blueprints. Summonings mostly. - Request for Manager Interaction:
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Max of only 51. < Rakshasa Warrior: Mihira -- A Class. >  + A mighty warrior beast trained in the art of war and martial combat. Given the rank of a ‘Rakshasa’ , they are one of the stronger warriors as part of the Blood Vale Tigers. Mihira is a humanoid-orange and black striped tiger capable of standing on two legs and is clad in a red armor. The armor is styled in an ancient gladiator/type build with less for defense and more for offense. He has a light helm with a horn at the front. The armor enhances his power over fire as well. He is also adorned with twin blades called “The Blades of Chaos” two wicked swords with a chain attacked to them similar to a kusarigama. Though this is preferred weapon of choice, he is an arms master—capable of wielding many weapons. He is known to have a violent, fiery temper. He is one of the more difficult tigers to summon, but in terms of raw power, he is exceptional. He is known for slaughtering his foes with wild abandonment. However, unlike most tigers, he doesn’t need any form of payment to fulfill the task summoned for. So long as he has an enemy he can kill, he is happy to do so. Summons: 1 A Class Summons. Chakra & Stamina Cost: 410 & 226 (-25% on Custom Summons ) 308 & 170 Effect: 1 Summons with +150 of Character Base Attributes. Elements 1 / 2 – Fire, Limit: 20 Turns - Summon Jutsu and abilities:
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Blades of Chaos = Strengh + 15 , Damage = 40 Gladiator Armor = Endurance + 15.
+ - Katon: Rakshasa Infernal Armor - > > Mihira armor is cursed—possessing the power of a Rakshasa—a demon of lore that the Blood Vale tigers revere. Releasing it with his own chakra, flames coat over Mihira, creating a ‘chakra armor’ of fire in the shape of one of these fearsome creatures. While in this state, the power of fire is severely amplified along with his own and allies’ attacks becoming stronger. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (upkeep) + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: Damage for both summon and contractor increases by X1.30 + Katon/Katon affiliated jutsu now do direct damage to enemies. + Burning if attacked.
+ - Katon: Inferno Tiger Dance- > > Mihira ignites his body to blitz across the battlefield, leaving a burning trail. Attacks he leaves on a target actually leaves large, burning claw marks into the ground as he slashes through his prey. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: 225 + Weapon Damage X1.50 + Burn
+ - Katon: Inferno Tiger Claw - > > Flames coat Mihira’s paws and claws, surging with intense heat. Via a slash through the air, the tiger warrior may launch a barrage of fiery darts that can not only cut, but explode upon impact. When used in combination to an ally’s katon-affiliated or Fuuton ninjutsu, both of them are powered up by the momentum of this jutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Combination + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: 250 + Burning + If ally uses Katon-affiliated jutsu or Fuuton jutsu, both jutsu increase damage by X 1.25 and +4 to battle dice roll.
2.< Akuma Tiger -- A Class. >  + A fierce, terrifying beast that is said to prowl the wilds of the Blood Vale Jungle, home of the tigers. Unlike its kin, this tiger maintains more of its animalistic natures and instincts—not capable of talking or human reasoning as much as other ninja-beasts. This fierce predator is This tiger is a good 20 feet tall and is in good height amongst trees. He is orange with black stripes. Though a pure and feral beast—Akuma Tiger is a beast that is still capable of using chakra on an instinctual level. When used, it adds to his terrifying appearance by actually creating the vision of ‘extra heads’ next to its main one. It became known as a monster, hence earning its name. Those who choose to summon this ferocious beast, do so with caution. He is most likely to attack both friend and foe alike and have them for a snack. Summons: 1 A Class Summons. Chakra & Stamina Cost: 410 & 226 (-25% on Custom Summons ) 308 & 170 Effect: 1 Summons with +150 of Character Base Attributes. Elements 0 / 2 – Focus: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Limit: 20 Turns - Jutsu and abilities:
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+ - Devil-Beast Transformation - > > Akuma Tiger uses a form of ninjutsu to power up both his strength and senses. Channeling chakra into his muscles, the beast powers up his strength and his sensory abilities—which results in the semi-transformation of the extra ‘heads’ to appear next to his own. With this enhancement, so does his appetite grows. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (upkeep) + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: Strength increases by X 1.40 + Enhance senses =Combat Rolls +4 + Taijutsu/Melee attacks Ignores 50% in enemy END.
+ - Rakshasa Chaos Tornado- > > Akuma tiger charges at an enemy and suddenly enters a violent, rapid spin of its body! The raging beast becomes like a tornado in his spin as he flies at objects, both enemy and terrain—and ripping right through them. While in this spinning motion, along with his ‘multiple heads’ and claws—Akuma tiger can easily tear through solid steal, ripping almost anything to shreds. + Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: 240 + 1 / 2 of Dex + Regains X 1. 15 of stamina if successful hit + Drawback and Restrictions: Loses X .10 of dex and 25 HP per use.
+ - Bloody Nightmare Mauling - > > Akuma tiger enters a blind rage as he charges forward to the enemy target. Driven by fury and bloodlust, the massive tiger attacks with both his claws and jaws, powerful enough to gut into the toughest of opponents. In this motion, his claws are moving so fast , it looks like a storm of movement, ripping his enemies apart till blood smears the ground and surroundings. + Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: 240 + attack damage is carried out via opponent’s original End – negate nexus buffs. + Drawback and Restrictions: N/A
3.< East Guardian: Taiyoumaru-- A Class. >  + A mighty orange and black-striped tiger dawned in sacred samurai armor. This tiger is 3 meters long and 1-meter-wide, being the size of an exceptionally large, but realistic tiger by comparison. Much like other tigers of Blood Vale jungle, this ninja animal is capable of human speech and cognitive thought. This fierce warrior, named Taiyoumaru, is a vanguard of the boarders of the jungle. He is a fierce and proud warrior of the Blood Vale Tigers. While many are of the Rashaska class of warriors, he chooses to be more affiliated with the noble nature of the samurai. He has a deep love in the samurai lore, teachings and code, despite being a ‘feral tiger’ in his stature. It however doesn’t stop him from taking a sword with his own teeth to fight his enemies. He dawns a powerful armor infused with the power of fire, called the Kagutsuchi Armor, a white and black-striped armor that is worn on the front of the tiger’s body and upon his head., with two ‘horn-like’ protrusions near the head. Parts of the armor are worn on the fronts and backs of his leggings. Taiyoumaru also is unique for being able to wield a mighty Nodachi with its own maw alone. Asura has a great respect and liking to this animal, and so does the reverse as Taiyoumaru has no issue being summoned to fight strong opponents. Moreso, Asura often rewards Taiyoumaru by actually crafting him new swords and weapons. Summons: 1 A Class Summons. Chakra & Stamina Cost: 410 & 226 (-25% on Custom Summons ) 308 & 170 Effect: 1 Summons with +150 of Character Base Attributes. Elements 1 / 2: Katon – Focus: Kenjutsu Limit: 20 Turns - Jutsu and Abilities (Items):
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Items: + - Nodachi (Long Katana) - > > Blade that is only 12 ft long, and usually carried by Shoguns in time of war. The long handle copes with the weight of the blade but requires 2 hands to even wield unless stronger enough. + Type: Marital (STR: 180 = 1 Handed Wield) | Cannot Dual Wield another Nodachi + P.Effect: +14 STR + Damage: 60 + - Iron Samurai Armor - > > A thick gray metal armor that allow greater protect for samurais. It can allow one to bear a clan symbol as well. But is stronger than a clan armor. + P.Effect: +20 END Placement: Outer Body
+ Bukijutsu: (Varies) STR x [Combo] = MAX DMG
+ - Katon: Rising Sun Slash - > > Grasping the sword firmly in his teeth, the blade swing causes friction in the air, causing the blade to be set ablaze. A vicious slice of this blade causes powerful burns as well as slicing an opponent with lethal cutting power in three swift slices. The resulting slash writes the kanji for Fire with it. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: Sword Combo X 3 + Burn Status +
+ Katon : Hellfire Arena - - > > Tayoumaru swings his large fire sword around, projecting a massive ring of fire that eclipses the battlefield. This lasting effect forces enemies to face the user/users head on in a form of an arena, where they cannot escape, or use counter-measures to escape. This also enhances the power of fire used within it. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: Enemy rolls lowered by -6 for 4 posts. + Enemy cannot escape (Except with jutsu via tunneling or space time) + Katon affiliated jutsu get +3 to dice rolls. + Limit: 4
+ - Katon: Searing Slicer - > > With the sword gripped in his teeth, Taiyoumaru charges at an incoming enemy or jutsu attack. With his own movement, he slashes into the enemy attack, ripping it apart, delivering damage and defending against an enemy attack at the same time. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive/Defensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: Sword Combo X 2 + Burn Status + If used as reaction, enemy Dex-affiliated attack/jutsu is halfed. (Roll is reflected with enemy action roll)
4.< Rakshasa Warrior: Mihira (Living Weapon Mode) -- S Class. >  + A mighty warrior beast trained in the art of war and martial combat. Given the rank of a ‘Rakshasa’ , they are one of the stronger warriors as part of the Blood Vale Tigers. Mihira is a humanoid-orange and black striped tiger capable of standing on two legs and is clad in a red armor. The armor is styled in an ancient gladiator/type build with less for defense and more for offense. He has a light helm with a horn at the front. The armor enhances his power over fire as well. He is also adorned with twin blades called “The Blades of Chaos” two wicked swords with a chain attacked to them similar to a kusarigama. Though this is preferred weapon of choice, he is an arms master—capable of wielding many weapons. He is known to have a violent, fiery temper. He is one of the more difficult tigers to summon, but in terms of raw power, he is exceptional. He is known for slaughtering his foes with wild abandonment. However, unlike most tigers, he doesn’t need any form of payment to fulfill the task summoned for. So long as he has an enemy he can kill, he is happy to do so. Unlike his other summon form-- this one focuses on the attributes of his blades. Not only is he is capable of using them with the same fiery expertise, but also transforms himself into a legendary weapon, giving the contractor the same abilities he has. Summons: 1 S Class Summons. Chakra & Stamina Cost: 510 & 332 (25% off custom summon) 383 & 249 Effect: 1 Summons with +200 of Character Base Attributes. Elements 1 / 2 – Fire, Focus: Scythe/Ken Jutsu, Ninjutsu. Limit: 10 Turns - Summon Jutsu and abilities:
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Blades of Chaos = Strengh + 15 , Damage = 40 Gladiator Armor = Endurance + 15.
+ - Beast Weapon Transformation-- Rakshasa Blades - > > Mihira performs a dance and stance, after which uses his chakra to transform into a living weapon. Transforms into the "Rakshasa Blades", a chained weapon connecting two large blades, to be held in both hands, but capable to be swung around. A sturdy chain connects the two together + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Transformation + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Transforms self into Chained blades (technically Kusarigama)= Summon stats are stacked on top of wielder. Requires equipping present weapon slot. Rarity (Green) Weapon Dmg= Summon Strength /10 + Binding effect via chains connecting blades. + Jutsu owned by summon can be used by summoner when equipped & Costs for jutsu divided between both summon and summoner. + If unheld, the blades may move of their own accord via telekinetic force via Mihira's will. +Restrictions: Effect of Sunder immediately ends transformation on Mihira, returning him back to normal and cannot be transformed within summoned limit. + If unheld and blades moving on their own, stat stacking does not apply.
+ - Katon: Inferno Tiger Claw-- MK2 - > > Flames coat Mihira’s paws and claws or when in weapon form-- his blades. Slashes of the blades leaves burning cleaves in the ground as the user rushes in a series of dashes. Also, its power increases for each fire jutsu used before use. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Combination + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Sword Combo X 4 + Burning + Gains 1.X20 more damage per Katon-affiliated jutsu used in this turn.
+ - Katon: Hellfire Chains - > > Using the chains connected to the "Blades of CHaos" or in "Rakshasa Blades" mode, the user delivers a dance of blade slashes against the enemy, all the while winding the movement of the chains around the said target. With a final pull and slash, the user, is able to tie up the enemy, restraining its movements. When entrapped, the chains glow red hot from fiery heat-- burning the entrapped target. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Combination + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Sword Combo X 3 + Burning + Restrained/Binding Status
+ - Katon: Blaze Demon--Inferno Maw - > > Gripping hold of chains, for either held weapon or transformed state, the wielder swings the blades in two different directions. The resulting spin and chakra causes them to catch fire in their motion. In a series of swings towards the enemy, the two blades lash quickly at the target, delivering severs slashing damage. This jutsu may also be used defensively to stop enemy attacks and repel the same force against them. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Combination + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Sword Combo X 6 + Burning + Reduce enemy ninjutsu, tool-jutsu and Taijutsu damage by 50% when used in reaction. + Half of reduced damage added to resulting damage.
5.< Shin Long: Jian of the Golden Claw-- A Class. >  + Both a wise and skilled fighter, this mighty were-tiger of the Blood Vale tribe chose to master the arts of both ninjutsu and taijutsu. He is an orange and black striped tiger, wearing a light sleeveless tunic, slightly ripped in places, and long blue pants that stop at his ankles, his feet bare. He wears golden bracers along his wrists. His methods embodying the true style of kung fu, allows him to use the methods of nin-taijutsu to a successful extent. He is sought after by many fighters, for both challenges and younger people in the interest to be trained by the mighty tiger as pupils. His training has taught him to harness the power of the wind and earth to enhance his own power and learn the true art of the fist/claw . He was called the Master of the Golden Claw, for embodying the land in his methods of martial arts. A rare title indeed. He has respect for anyone who seeks to better themselves using martial arts and is always happy to entertain someone with a good spirited fight. However, when it comes to the defense of the defenseless—he is merciless and cold in his actions. Summons: 1 A Class Summons. Chakra & Stamina Cost: 410 & 226 (-25% on Custom Summons ) 308 & 170 Effect: 1 Summons with +150 of Character Base Attributes. Elements 2 / 2: Doton, Futon – Focus: Nin-Taijtusu - Summon Jutsu and Abilities:
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+ - Fuuton: Storm Claw Kumite - > > Channeling wind chakra into his arms and legs, blows done via his martial arts creates a mighty gust of wind at the target. The winds-engulfed blows resemble twisters as the limbs are propelled forward by the spiraling winds and hinder an enemy’s reactions. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: 220 + Melee Dmg + Stun (Two Reactions reduced)
+ - Doton: Roaring Earth Impact- > > Long jumps high into the air and with a kick off into the sky, he plummets back to the ground with an earth-shattering kick. His infused chakra is sent into the earth, creating a massive quake that sends earth and debris in all directions. Both the tremors and flying debris makes it harder for enemies to land solid attacks. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: 250 to all enemies + Melee Dmg to single target in addition + Enemy rolls -6 next turn.
+ - Tiger Kumite: Rupture Maul- > > Resorting to pure Taijutsu, Long drives his body right to the target. The first blow he delivers a sweep of his arm, hitting the target for their neck to lock them in. He then relaxes his arm—to bend it into a head lock and grapple the target. Once restrained, he delivers a powerful blow to an enemy weak spot, now in close range to aim accurately and cripple the target! + Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Effect: 200 + Grapple Status + Upon success, target loses 50 HP per turn till healed via a ‘bleeding’ status.
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Max of only 5 1.A form of Kunai with a designed tip to carry a small item, wire, explosion tag, ext. Dmg: 10 + 1 extra item effect. ( Blue Print: 1X Ingot + 1 Gem slot Opitional.)
2.Priest's Sandals Worn by priests or other rural citizens, these light material shoes allow very little protection but offer a person the best in mobility. Effect: +15 Dex. (Blue print: 1X Ingot
3.Temple Wraps: Place, Feet Near bear footed, these light weighted metallic wraps secure and protect the soles of one's feet and the top of the foot. Part of a sacred garb, it flowes with divine energy to make the wearer more agile and stronger. The metallic part makes kicks hit harder. Effect: + Dex 15 + STR +5 (Blue Print: 1 X Ingot + 1 Gem slot optional)
4.Duel-Kusarigama A duel weapon that is constructed of two smaller scythes, 1 foot handle with curved blades for each hand. Attached to the handles at the bottom is a steel chain that connects the two together. A versatile weapon that allows both melee and range combat. Also capable of tying up enemies.
Effect: 45 DMG + Bind STR = STR x1.50 Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 2 Gem slots optional
5.Tiger Claw A melee one handed weapon that is worn on the back of the hand and wrist. Use of this weapon is ideal for those for close combat, and skilled to slash at an opponent. Composed of three sharpened blades and a handle for strikes with the weapon. Effect: Dmg= 30 Blue Print: X2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Thu Nov 24 2016, 22:33 | |
| bump because i can't f---ing approve myself |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Mon Mar 06 2017, 17:36 | |
| Bump like a catholic rabbit |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Wed Mar 08 2017, 09:49 | |
| Katon Infernal Armor Cost: 460 / 253 (Upkeep: 253/114)
Katon Inferno Dance Cost: 480 / 264
Katon Tiger Claw Cost: 500 / 257 (Rolls lowered to +3)
Devil Beast Cost: 490 / 270 (270/ 140) Combat rolls = +3
Chaos Tornado Cost: 470
Nightmare Mauling Cost: 480
Beast Weapon Cost: 560 / 364
Mk2 Tiger Claw Cost: 580 / 377
Inferno Maw Cost: 600 /400
Hellfire chains Cost: 570/370
Storm Claw Cost: 420/231
Earth Impact Cost: 440/154
Rupture Maul Cost: 400 |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Wed Mar 08 2017, 10:11 | |
| 4/5 left. You forgot Taiyoumaru's skills
You also forgot item approvals |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Sun Mar 12 2017, 08:30 | |
| Topic was addressed on skype. values
Rising Sun - 410/226 Hellifre Arena - 430/237 Searing Slicer - 450/248 |
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| 1.A form of Kunai with a designed tip to carry a small item, wire, explosion tag, ext. Dmg: 10 + 1 extra item effect. ( Blue Print: 1X Ingot + 1 Gem slot Optional.)
2.Priest's Sandals Worn by priests or other rural citizens, these light material shoes allow very little protection but offer a person the best in mobility. Effect: +15 Dex. (Blue print: 1X Ingot
3.Temple Wraps: Place, Feet Near bear footed, these light weighted metallic wraps secure and protect the soles of one's feet and the top of the foot. Part of a sacred garb, it flowes with divine energy to make the wearer more agile and stronger. The metallic part makes kicks hit harder. Effect: + Dex 15 + STR +5 (Blue Print: 1 X Ingot + 1 Gem slot optional)
4.Duel-Kusarigama A duel weapon that is constructed of two smaller scythes, 1 foot handle with curved blades for each hand. Attached to the handles at the bottom is a steel chain that connects the two together. A versatile weapon that allows both melee and range combat. Also capable of tying up enemies.
Effect: 45 DMG + Bind STR = STR x1.50 Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 2 Gem slots optional
5.Tiger Claw A melee one handed weapon that is worn on the back of the hand and wrist. Use of this weapon is ideal for those for close combat, and skilled to slash at an opponent. Composed of three sharpened blades and a handle for strikes with the weapon. Effect: Dmg= 30 Blue Print: X2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
2 – 5 Denied – until fixed
Kunai w/ Item Carrier: Approved
Priest’s Sandals Too high of an P.Effect: Should be around +8
Temple Wraps: Should have it read that is just blessed from the priests/monks that created it as well. P. Effect: STR +10 | DEX +5 (Doesn’t say anything to say makes you lighter I’d add that too for the reason it increases DEX.
Duel Kusarigama – We call Kama’s or sickles for these items. DMG: 30 | Chain Bind Strength = STR 250 and lower.
Tiger Claw - P Effect: +5 STR | +5 DEX DMG: 30 |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Sun Apr 30 2017, 12:49 | |
| Fixing the following 2-5.
2.Priest's Sandals Worn by priests or other rural citizens, these light material shoes allow very little protection but offer a person the best in mobility. Effect: +8 Dex. (Blue print: 1X Ingot )
3.Temple Wraps: Place, Feet Near bear footed, these light weighted metallic wraps secure and protect the soles of one's feet and the top of the foot. Part of a sacred garb, it flowes with divine energy to make the wearer more agile and stronger. The metallic part makes kicks hit harder. Effect: + Dex 8 + STR +5 (Blue Print: 1 X Ingot + 1 Gem slot optional)
4.Duel-Kusarigama/ Kama A duel weapon that is constructed of two smaller scythes, 1 foot handle with curved blades for each hand. Attached to the handles at the bottom is a steel chain that connects the two together. A versatile weapon that allows both melee and range combat. Also capable of tying up enemies. P. effect: +5 Strength. Effect: 30 DMG + Bind STR = 250 Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 2 Gem slots optional
5.Tiger Claw A melee one handed weapon that is worn on the back of the hand and wrist. Use of this weapon is ideal for those for close combat, and skilled to slash at an opponent. Composed of three sharpened blades and a handle for strikes with the weapon. P. Effect: +5 STR | +5 DEX Effect: Dmg= 30 Blue Print: X2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Sun Apr 30 2017, 15:13 | |
| Reviewed and cleared for approved. The P.Effect are given based upon the ingot that is used. Its my fault for not informing Grave about that. so that P.Effect will vary based upon metals used and can also stack. Also adds to Damage based upon metal used. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Sun Apr 30 2017, 23:05 | |
| Another jutsu and item post-- Selling 1, 3, 4 of Jutsu here for site. The rest I'll keep as personal jutsu I suppose-- just so no one else can mass replicate unless they pay me-- cause they are pretty good. But sold jutsu can still have owners that wont work on them? Either way there it is. Also don't forget to check the items please. - Quote :
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Max of only 51.[+ -Tai-ken Style: Snip the Web - >] [> Jutsu Description]: A Taijutsu move utilizing the use of a sword. A precision based series of slashes designed for attacks-- but also work to disrupt enemy tools that depend on a constant stream of chakra. This jutsu is most effective against the art of "Puppetry" ninjutsu to severe chakra strings and prevent their involvement. [+ Stamina Cost:] < [+ Type:] < - [Offensive & Supplementary] [+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - 0 + C [+ Damage +/or Effect] < - 100 + Negate Puppet-related/Chakra string jutsu. + Target enemy may not use Puppetry tools or jutsu for 1 turn. [+ Requirements+/or Restrictions]: Requires Tai-ken style + User must have an active Chakra Blade/weapon to use this jutsu. 2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >] [> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible. [+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep) [+ Type:] < - [Supplementary] [+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class [+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self. Negate stealth/concealment jutsu and Stealth Dice =30 instantly. + [+ Sp. Effect] <- 100% Doton Mastery = Dice Rolls +3 + Enemy dice roll -3. [+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected. [+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability. [+ Creator:] Asura Jiin. NOte: This jutsu might be a bit OP, but let me know what I can do to make it better-- main goal is to make a sensory jutsu that works 3.+ - Doton: Doryūheki/Mud Wall - > > The user creates a wall of earth via their chakra or manipulation of surrounding soil. The wall is created to defend against powerful attacks. The wall is infused with chakra which allows it to take a variety of attacks from enemy ninjutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Defense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4+ B + Effect: Blocks Damage= END X 1.50 4. + - Youton: Rubber Balloon Barrier- > > Generates Lava Style into the form of a rubber material from one’s mouth. Formed in the shape around the caster or a target ally, it creates a protective force against enemy attacks. Due to the nature of this jutsu, it is incredibly durable to the elements and makes it extremely unlikely to break from common nature release jutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Defense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 2+ B + Effect: END+ Youton Mastery X 1.50= Damage Blocked + Negates all base Chakra Nature Transformation jutsu (Fire, water, wind, earth, lightning) Note: This jutsu designed so being made of a form of rubber-- and because rubber is an insulator and something that nature cannot naturally dissolve, I felt it would be possible to make immune to the 5 basic chakra natures. If wrong, let me know and Ill work it out. 5. + - Doton: Rasengan—Torment of Atlas - > >A Variation of the Rasengan created by a rogue ninja of Iwa. Named after the Titan, Atlas who was said to hold up the very planet on his back through the sea of chaos as punishment for his crimes. Focusing enhanced earth-chakra into the Rasengan, the chakra becomes denser. Pieces of earth orbit around the sphere and it glows with a darkness like black onyx. This deceptive jutsu takes the form of a powerful attack—but its true power comes in its massive gravity it inflicts upon the target. The infused chakra that makes contact will put so much pressure on the enemy, they won’t be able to lift a finger. A truly fearful jutsu, indeed. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0+ S+ + Damage + Effect: 300 + Target’s Nexus Stats reduced by X 0.50 & Target Dice Rolls = 0 for 3 turns. + Drawbacks and Restrictions: + Parent Jutsu: Rasengan, Doton: Ultimate Lead Body Weight, Doton: Yomi Hasaiki  + Creator: Asura JiinNote: This one may too be a bit too much. Maybe as a custom jutsu but thought I'd give it a try. The 50% debuff might not work but let me know what I can fix up. 25% might be more feasible. But you can see the attempt clearly. A Rasengan version of Doton's finest techniques.
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Max of only 5 1. Jian (Chinese Blade) A lithe but agile blade that is 12 inches long. its sleek design and balance allows this to be one of the most agile of blades. Type: Martial P. Effect: ---- Effect: 30 Dmg + (Blue Print: X 2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
2. - Scythe: Flip Blade - > > Standing with a 12ft pole with two crescent blade on each with each expanding 21in, they are believed to be a tool to be a symbol of “Yin & Yang” + Type: Marital + P. Effect: ---- + Damage: 60 (Blue Print: X 4 Ingots + 3 Gem Slots Optional)
3.Divine Circlet A small metallic band that is worn over the forehead. Consider a stylish trinket but holds great significance for crafters and monks. Placement: Head P. Effect: --- Blue Print: X1 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
4.+ - Mask {Unique Design} - > > Have a design featured on your mask to make it your very own. Special Ops wear ones that are designed based of animals. However, the mask may be designed however the shopper wants. + P. Effect: --- + Placement: Face
Blue Print ( X 2 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
5. War Mask A mysterious mask that one wears to obscure their identity and fortified to uphold well in combat! Durable and not easy to break. Someone with something to hide. P. Effect: ---- + Hide Face. Placement: Face Blue Print: X 2 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Sat May 13 2017, 00:16 | |
| Corrections-- made from skype conversation with Grave. Removing the Rubber shield. :
1.[+ -Tai-ken Style: Snip the Web - >] [> Jutsu Description]: A Taijutsu move utilizing the use of a sword. A precision based series of slashes designed for attacks-- but also work to disrupt enemy tools that depend on a constant stream of chakra. This jutsu is most effective against the art of "Puppetry" ninjutsu to severe chakra strings and prevent their involvement. [+ Stamina Cost:] < [+ Type:] < - [Offensive & Supplementary] [+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - 0 + C [+ Damage +/or Effect] < Cut Puppet/Chakra strings and negate related jutsu. + Target enemy may not use Puppetry tools or jutsu for 1 turn. [+ Requirements+/or Restrictions]: Requires Tai-ken style + User must have an active Chakra Blade/weapon to use this jutsu.
2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >] [> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible. [+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep) [+ Type:] < - [Supplementary] [+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class [+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =30 instantly.
[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected. [+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability. [+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.
3.+ - Doton: Doryūheki/Mud Wall - > > The user creates a wall of earth via their chakra or manipulation of surrounding soil. The wall is created to defend against powerful attacks. The wall is infused with chakra which allows it to take a variety of attacks from enemy ninjutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Defense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4+ B + Effect: Blocks Damage= END X 1.20
Rasengan Jutsu-- (No critique was made to fix this so assume its correct. )
Making new jutsu to replace lava shield.
(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- > > User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep) + Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary. + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S + Effect: STR + END X 1.40 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.50
(Subject to change of staff disagree)
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri May 19 2017, 14:34 | |
| Bump-- I';d like this approve before its buried again damnit! |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri May 19 2017, 22:35 | |
| I'll be taking over for this part as I was in the area in doing so.
1.[+ -Tai-ken Style: Snip the Web - >] [> Jutsu Description]: A Taijutsu move utilizing the use of a sword. A precision based series of slashes designed for attacks-- but also work to disrupt enemy tools that depend on a constant stream of chakra. This jutsu is most effective against the art of "Puppetry" ninjutsu to severe chakra strings and prevent their involvement. [+ Stamina Cost:] < [+ Type:] < - [Offensive & Supplementary] [+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - 0 + C [+ Damage +/or Effect] < Cut Puppet/Chakra strings and negate related jutsu. + Target enemy may not use Puppetry tools or jutsu for 1 turn. [+ Requirements+/or Restrictions]: Requires Tai-ken style + User must have an active Chakra Blade/weapon to use this jutsu.
APPROVED
2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >] [> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible. [+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep) [+ Type:] < - [Supplementary] [+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class [+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =30 instantly. [+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected. [+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability. [+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.
x No, I understand what it does but not instantly roll I will only allow it to be at least +5 but that is it. As even sensory type shinobi cannot get a 100% accurate reading of someone they are looking for as shown during the fourth shinobi war.
3.+ - Doton: Doryūheki/Mud Wall - > > The user creates a wall of earth via their chakra or manipulation of surrounding soil. The wall is created to defend against powerful attacks. The wall is infused with chakra which allows it to take a variety of attacks from enemy ninjutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Defense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4+ B + Effect: Blocks Damage= END X 1.20
APPROVED
Rasengan Jutsu-- (No critique was made to fix this so assume its correct. )
Making new jutsu to replace lava shield.
(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- > > User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep) + Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary. + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S + Effect: STR + END X 1.40 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.50
x Changes that is too high for an S rank technique they would have to be lowered to be at least to x1.25 As they surpass the powers of several site made techniques. They must stay under that.
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri May 19 2017, 22:41 | |
| 2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >] [> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible. [+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep) [+ Type:] < - [Supplementary] [+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class [+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =+5 instantly. [+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected. [+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability. [+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.
HOpe this one is better.
(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- > > User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep) + Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary. + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S + Effect: STR + END X 1.25 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.25
Okay I put 1.25 . Word of warning though, i got an inferno style chakra mode coming up that is Hi-jutsu later on ideally 1.50 so let me know what happens.
Also, the Rasengan, you didn't say anything about it so ill repost it here. But look to the spoiler sections in previous posts to see it.
5. + - Doton: Rasengan—Torment of Atlas - > >A Variation of the Rasengan created by a rogue ninja of Iwa. Named after the Titan, Atlas who was said to hold up the very planet on his back through the sea of chaos as punishment for his crimes. Focusing enhanced earth-chakra into the Rasengan, the chakra becomes denser. Pieces of earth orbit around the sphere and it glows with a darkness like black onyx. This deceptive jutsu takes the form of a powerful attack—but its true power comes in its massive gravity it inflicts upon the target. The infused chakra that makes contact will put so much pressure on the enemy, they won’t be able to lift a finger. A truly fearful jutsu, indeed. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Offense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0+ S+ + Damage + Effect: 300 + Target’s Nexus Stats reduced by X 0.50 & Target Dice Rolls = 0 for 3 turns. + Drawbacks and Restrictions: + Parent Jutsu: Rasengan, Doton: Ultimate Lead Body Weight, Doton: Yomi Hasaiki
+ Creator: Asura Jiin
Note: This one may too be a bit too much. Maybe as a custom jutsu but thought I'd give it a try. The 50% debuff might not work but let me know what I can fix up. 25% might be more feasible. But you can see the attempt clearly. A Rasengan version of Doton's finest techniques.
This needs approvbal-- also all the items i made in items.
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri May 19 2017, 22:43 | |
| That is because it was not posted on the above post that you placed up. I only reviewed the latest post that you posted. I'll go over it once you have done so. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri May 19 2017, 22:44 | |
| Um, the latest post was corrections made with Grave-- from that first seciton. He and i talked it on skype, so you can check with him Its all part of the first request, and I made the changes so it should be good. |
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| Sorry, about that yeah I have talked with Zaber about the corrections that needed to be taken for them. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri May 19 2017, 22:56 | |
| If changes are to be made its best to always keep them on the thread. This way if anything that happens while another member reviews this information will not be confused as to why its one thing when it reads something else.
This also helps me review the techniques a bit easier I'm fine if you update them through skype but remember they are still going here so just cause "Grave" said its okay it should always be shown that you say, "Okay so these are my changes with Grave as we spoke and he said, etc etc" By showing a bit of the chat information or history can help in the long run I promise just not too much.
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests Fri May 19 2017, 23:00 | |
| Let me rephrase. First of all, I can't edit my previous application because after a certtain amount of time, you can't edit it. Its just how this stupid site works.
Second, id love for it to be on here, but neither you or Grave were around so he just poked at it and we discussed approachable changes on skype-- which I reposed said jutsu here. I can't help it if some people are too lazy to come on. We need more attendance to this please.
If you want, ill repost the entire jutsu section, but i have to do all the fucking coding again. I am not asking a lot from you to just go back up to a page at least and see the last formated application. Its all there, but I cannot edit it to make it more acceptable.
ALl the posts after that format are corrections. |
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