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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Jul 19 2018, 16:19

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Fri Jul 20 2018, 13:35

Posting remake for this:

3.+ - Screaming Zephyr - +
> The fourth mantra gate, Anahata, elevates the body and spirit above the limits of human speed. The user charges forward with a burst of chakra and speed, amplified 10 times over. The user kicks off and the result sprint is so fast, they can add a superior boost of speed to their attack
+ Stamina Cost: - 35%
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Rank:  B
+ Damage + Effect: Damage = Dexterity X1.20
+ Drawback: User’s HP drops by 15%. till healed.
+ Requirement & Restriction: This taijutsu can only be activated with the (4th) Charka Gate: Anahata active.
+Created by: Asura Jiin


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Jul 26 2018, 04:33

Is this the same jutsu we spoke about before? Where I told you you had to go with either.

A. It can keep its effects, however you cannot avoid this drawback which will cause you to lose a -15% HP permanently per use as its going to rip your body to even produce that speed.


B. You remove Anti Counter/Anti Evade in all taking the -20% HP but it will not be a permanent, and the DEX is added to the damage without boost.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Jul 26 2018, 09:19

3.+ - Screaming Zephyr - +
> The fourth mantra gate, Anahata, elevates the body and spirit above the limits of human speed. The user charges forward with a burst of chakra and speed, amplified 10 times over. The user kicks off and the result sprint is so fast, they can add a superior boost of speed to their attack
+ Stamina Cost: - 20%
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Rank:  B
+ Damage + Effect: Damage = Dexterity
+ Drawback: User’s HP drops by 20%. till healed.
+ Requirement & Restriction: This taijutsu can only be activated with the (4th) Charka Gate: Anahata active.
+Created by: Asura Jiin


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Fri Aug 03 2018, 00:00

Requesting approval for following Mercinary: Jutsu and other options to add later.

- Price: 60,000 Ryo
- Level: 75 | AP: 18,750
- Reputation Requirement: 4001 to 5000
- Attribute Pts: 4600 (split)
- Jutsu Count: 2 E Rank + 2 D Rank + 2 C Rank + 2 B Rank + 2 A Rank + 1 S Rank
- Element Count: 3 | Start: 100% |100% | 100%

Also requesting the approval of the following blue prints. (KInd of out there but what the hell... lets try it. If approvable let me know the max of boost i can give . Done the math and P effect for a % boost doesn't yield much for the material limit. )

Accessory: Ring
A delicate hand is needed to craft fine jewelry, styled with a good sense of art. These rings are beautiful works often sold at a high price-- and also are said to improve the energies of whoever wears em.
+ P. effect : _____(Max Chakra And/OR Stamina) +1.50 P effect = X% (if both types, number must be divided)
+ Materials: +3 ingots + 1 gem slot (optional)

Accessory: Neclace
A delicate hand is needed to craft fine jewelry, styled with a good sense of art. These necklaces or pendants are symbols of great value and meaning to the wearer-- and also are said to improve the energies of whoever wears em.
+ P. effect : _____(Max Chakra And/OR Stamina) +1.75 P effect = X% (if both types, number must be divided)
+ Materials: +3 ingots + 1 gem slot (optional)





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Ravana "The Insatiable" Sensōkami



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Ravana is a rogue ninja from the Shishen continent, long before it was aware by the eastern countries. Born in a wartorn country and age, he learned to survive on the streets. He stole and fought with little shame in it as survival of the fittest was the rule he had to live by. He was discovered to have potential so he was drafted into shinobi ranks for that country. Though training as a shinobi made him skilled with a sword and taught him to discipline in martial arts, even from monks,  nothing could stop him from  his desires. Worldy and physical desires drove him forward as a bandit lord and mercenary.

He soon earned an infamous reputation as a thief, swordsman, and reaped his spoils of war wherever he went. He fought enemies, stole treasure, and known for countless offenses against being a pervert and womanizer via genjutsu. He was dubbed a rogue ninja of Shishen, and soon sought out more to concur and explore in the eastern continents. He served time among the shinobi of Kiri, acting as a mercinary there but soon grew bored.  He soon arrives in Iwa-- where he is cockblocked by a red-headed Shinobi and tries to turn him in.

Amused by his fighting spirit, the larger swordsman took the kid under his wing to teach him Taijutsu-- and introduced him to the Blood Vale Tigers. Though a selfish bastard, he grew a soft spot for the kid and saw him as a potential pupil.

Ravana is a laidback, fun-loving, boastful older man. He is shameless in his actions, not having an ounce of doubt or guilt in what he does. He will gladly wear the brand of rogue so long as he can persue his desires and freedom as he sees fit. Freedom is the one treasure he will never put a price on. Despite his simplistic demeanor, he is surprisingly wise about the inner self and forces that drive a person. It was that wisdom that taught him the basics of the inner gates of Shishen continent. He will say any challenge as fun and the thrill of even death amuses him. To him, the only reason to fight is to fight itself. For a hedonist, he is the strongest one yet.  


Level of Merc: Kage : Lvl 75 (+375 % bonus)
AP: 6,750

Stats:

Health: 955

Brawn: 955
Endurance: 835
Dexterity: 960

Intelligence: 600
Awareness: 650
Sanity: 600

Chakra: 250% (+150%)
Stamina: 325% (+225%)

Elements:

1. Raiton 100%
2. Fuuton 100%
3. Suiton 100%

Character Gear:
 

Abilities:
 

Jutsu List:
 








- Jutsu Count: 2 E Rank + 2 D Rank + 2 C Rank + 2 B Rank + 2 A Rank + 1 S Rank
- Element Count: 3


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Aug 04 2018, 00:00

bump for Merc approval-- also fixing the ring/necklace blueprint due to its not allowed to increase max amounts ><

For both:

+ P. effect : _____
+ Materials: +3 ingots + 1 gem slot (optional)


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Aug 04 2018, 00:08

As you already know the Ring and Necklace will be...

But the Mercenary...


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Aug 04 2018, 00:16

Rings are fixed from the ability posted just after the initial post-- just letting you know


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Aug 04 2018, 00:24

Rings and Necklace seem good


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Wed Aug 15 2018, 22:49

Requesting emergency approval of the following Jiin clan details.

Due to events upcoming requesting a temporary approval of Jiin clan doujutsu and abilities. The moment Wulf has made the clan changes, I will adjust all jutsu below.

Abilities:

Katon [Fire] Dominance
The Jiin take their control and manipulation of Fire Style very seriously and are extremely dedicated to learning everything thing they can about it. This has led to the speculation that no one in the shinobi world has a better understanding of fire than the Jiin.
Effect: Katon DMG increase x1.25 | Cost of Learning Katon/Katon-affiliated Jutsu is 25% less | Reduce cost for Katon/Katon-affiliated techniques drop by half.
Rule: Gained during creation.

Katon [Fire] Resistance
As another result from their devotion to Fire Style Jutsu the Jiin have become more resistance to fire than a normal person.
Effect: Katon or Katon Combination DMG decreased by 25% | Can never be burned.
Rule: Gained during creation.


Katon [Fire] Manipulation – Katon [Fire] Dancing | [4/4] Openings
Another useful ability of the Jiin Clan is the ability to manipulate fire to their liking. Whether it be redirecting the attack or reflecting it back to their opponent.
Effect: Reflect Katon [Fire] attacks up to C-Ranked | Able to use Katon/Katon Combinations with no hand seals.
Rule: +5% of enemy jutsu’s cost chakra to Redirect Katon attacks | Must have 50% Tengan Mastery.

JIIN DOUJUTSU | ABILITIES:

Tengan – Divine Eyes
The Tengan is the Doujutsu of the Jiin Clan. It increases their Fire Manipulation abilities and grants them Heat and Thermal Manipulation on top of that.
Chakra: 20% [To Activate] | 10%[Per Turn]
Grants: Thermal Vision | X-Ray Vision | Accelerated Vision
Effect: Dex X1.25 + Awareness X 1.25
Restrictions: Non Jiin Members + X2 to Costs
Unlocked: 25% Tengan Mastery

Tengan: Negate Genjutsu
This ability allows the user to track heat signals thought the Genjutsu, thus cancelling most Genjutsu.
Grants: Immune to A-Ranked Genjutsus or lower
Unlocked: Automatically at 30% Tengan Mastery

Tengan: Thermal Manipulation
One of the most useful abilities of the Jiin Clan is the ability to manipulate their body temperature. They can keep their natural body temperature despite freezing temperatures and even lower their own to hide from thermal detection.
Grants: Immunity to freezing. | Cannot be detected by thermal detection methods.
Unlocked: Automatically at 40% Tengan Mastery

Tengan: Extinguish
This is the ability to lower temperatures of Katon and Katon combinations to the point where they are negated.
Grants: Negates Katon/Katon Combinations.
Costs: X% X=Enemy Jutsu Cost
Rule: Cannot extinguish Cosmic Flames
Unlocked: Automatically at 60% Tengan Mastery


TENGAN JUTSU :

Nensho [Combustion]
Nensho is an eye technique used that is the reverse of Bosshu Suru. While Bosshu Suru works by raising a target’s thermal temperature to cause them to burn from the inside—Nensho works by igniting oxygem outside of a body. The resulting spark created via the eyes, produces a flash and explosion of a powerful destructive nature similar to a bomb. This attack is very sudden and unexpected.
Chakra Costs: 60%
Hand Seal: None
Rank: S
Damage: 65% of Dex
Effect: Direct Damage + If User possess Enton at 100%, Dmg Increases by X1.25 OR if User Possesses Shounetsuton at 100%, Damage increases by X1.50.
Side Effects: Restrictions: Bonus to dmg via katon-affiliated elements can only be used once per cast. Cannot stack with each other.

Bosshū Suru [Immolate]
Nensho is an eye technique used in the same manner as Tsuiho, only this is used on living targets. Through Thermal Manipulation the user raises the temperature of their opponent to the point where their body suddenly bursts into flames. This attack is very sudden and unexpected. It can easily catch an opponent off guard.
Chakra: 60%
Hand Seal: None
Rank: S
Damage: 65% of Dex.
Effect: DMG for max period of 6 turns + Max Burns + 4 posts, enemy passes out—6, instant death.
Side Effects: With every use, Tengan upkeep increases by +5% | Can be Negated with another Tengan with equal Mastery

Jōka suru [Purify]/ Tsuiho [Banishment]
Tsuiho is an eye technique used specifically on those that are brought back to life from the dead. Just from looking at them the user causes them to burst into Sacred Flames, completely destroying their body and sending their soul back to the afterlife.
Chakra Costs: 60%
Hand Seal: None
Rank: S
Damage: 65% of Dex
Damage | Effect: Sends target back to afterlife. | Can be Negated with another Tegan of equal Mastery


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Aug 18 2018, 23:40

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#2 Chakra Water Container might need work due to unknown nature of ink gague or sand gauge , ext. Use for bubble jutsu. Ideas to follow:

1. 100% + whatever bonus from ingots , adds that for exclusive Suiton techniques only.
2. Unknown effect if Clay/Sand/Ink jutsu have effects based off them.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Aug 25 2018, 12:16

Chakra Water Container - Containers are more so items, which are able to be created by Inventors.

That Bubble peace pipe and style seems good but it should be a trade say you can increase the damage by 25% but you have take take like 12% damage. Also Nodachi Kenjutsu would mean only swords that are Nodachi's would work for the style.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Sat Aug 25 2018, 14:33

So its inventor only for the container? If so i understand.

Not sure what you mean by the bubble pipe? How should it be a trade for a weapon effect? I mean it be no different from a bukujutsu how you add the weapon damage to a jutsu.


As for the style--- yes, its intended for Nodachi only. I am selling this in the interest of my mercenary and site in general-- because almost all kenjutsu on site demand styles to use.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Thu Aug 30 2018, 21:04

After you get those chances son!
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:39

Approvals for customs: 1- new Doujutsu evolution for Tengan (due to lack of work from Wulf i am acting to approve it here) , 1 new custom blueprint, 1 new jutsu.

Evolved Tengan: -Taiyogan- Eyes of the Sun



1. + - Taiyogan– Sun Eyes “Eyes of the Sun” - >
> The true eyes of the Jiin are not achieved by the purest bloodline or the mastery of their arts. It is the manifestation of the true understanding of the phoenix and the cycle of life, death and rebirth in this world. As the phoenix is destine to die and be reborn from its ashes, only as a shinobi has faced death and returned—can these eyes truly open. The Tengan transform into a fiery iris with a phoenix spiraled into it, representing the wielder no longer bound by the notion or fear of death.

+ Chakra Cost: -20% [Active] -10% [Per Post]
+ Restrictions: Non-Jiin x2 to Cost[s]
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Abilities: Click Below!
+ Requirements to Learn & Drawbacks: Experience ‘Death’ in battle and be revived via some effect OR obtain Susaku Revival seal (reduced killed character to ash and revive them after battle). + This character cannot be reincarnated if they possess this doujutsu. + Cannot suicide to awaken these eyes.

Taiyogan Abilities:
 

2. (Color) Armor/Shirt
A piece of armor or cloth that is worn on the upper body, and may also encompass the lower body as well. Used to act as a form of defense to the body, but also represent a style of the wearer. .
Placement: Lower Body
Effect: ______
Blue Print X 3" _____ Ingots + Optional +1 Gem.

3. + - Bunshin Bōgai No Jutsu - Clone Jammer Technique - >
> Create a double of one's self, however, the clone will mimic everything that is done by the caster. They will vanish after having contact being made.
+ Chakra Cost: 10%
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + E
+ Effect: Transform into enemy. Cannot be targeted when enemy has clones out.
+ Parent Jutsu: Transformation Jutsu


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:51

They are good.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Wed Sep 26 2018, 10:56

New Approvals to make. WIP.

1. Summon

The Rakshasa Brothers: Kagetsumi and Chigatsumi (Armored Assault Mode): S Rank.



Both cunning and devious, these two tigers stand out among the others of the Blood Mist Jungle. Unlike many of their peers, they take on more humanoid appearances, standing on two legs but still upholding their tiger like features. Both are dressed and armed as Shinobi, trained in many of their arts. They also have shades of black/dark violet fur with stripes on their bodies. They also wear different color scarves. The two brothers are twins, sharing many traits between them and both enjoy working together, with the occasional competitions between one another. Whether its battle or social events, the two cause trouble wherever they go. The two specialize in stealth and subterfuge tactics, making one of the Tiger tribe's most dangerous warriors.

In this summon, the two brothers are stronger than ever as they are now more severly armored with equiptment meant for hard-core wars and missions. They also master combination jutsu that works with nature to increase their ferousity in battle.

Summons: 2 S Class Summons. (Via seed ability)
Chakra Cost: -80% (25% off costs for custom summon= 55% Chakra)
Effect:   2 Summons with  +200 of Character Base Attributes
Limit: 10 Turns
Summon Details and Jutsu:
 

2 + - Katon: Tiger Flare - >
> The caster releases a powerful breath and expells from the mouth or hand a flame that takes shape as a vicious hunting tiger of fire. While a powerful katon attack, its true ability allows the creation of altering nature around it to give aid to storm and lightning. A popular jutsu for SHinkoku shinobi.
+ Type: Offensive
+ Cost: 50%
+ Hand Seal(s) & Rank: 3 & A
+ Effect: Creates lightning clouds for 3 turns. + Raiton Jutsu gain "Cannot be Evaded" while clouds are out.

3. Shinlong: Rakshasa Cursed Tiger



The brother of Long, unlike his brother who sought the enlightenment of martial arts, the younger brother sought training with the Rakshasa Warriors, using the dark secrets of the jungle to gain strength. Becoming a warrior of the dark, he is seeped in darkness that also reflects into a blood-thirsty, demonic persona that loves to cause misery to enemies.

While skilled in melee combat as most of the Rakshasa, his fur had taken a dark hue as a result of absorbing too much dark chakra. As a result, his body had changed. His very stripes are layered in curse and sealing jutsu. Some to surpress the darkness in him-- others to inflict it onto others.

Summons: 1 S Class Summons.
Chakra Cost: -80% (25% off costs for custom summon= 55% Chakra)
Effect:   1 Summons with  +200 of Character Base Attributes
Limit: 10 Turns
Summon Details and Jutsu:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Wed Oct 03 2018, 21:24

I do not see an issue with them. They are approved.


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